My first fridayflash

[serpentrose]

Tradition allowed new Warriors to return home for a season before beginning their Service and Aife, having recently undergone the Ritual and become One Who Does Not Bleed, was looking forward to seeing family and friends she'd not seen in the seven years since she'd entered training. She'd learned much in that time, changed much, and wanted to tell

Comments

[gruberman]

Neat -- I'm curious to find out what happens.

Was calling the mother *name* an oversight, or was it like how authors sometimes don't name characters? "K-- said this, etc."

I have trouble thinking of good names

[serpentrose]

It was intended as a placeholder since I really don't know what to call the woman. Next week I will probably write something about Bronwynne for my Fridayflash.

Incidentally Bronwynne first appeared in a NaNo I wrote 5 years ago after TGISW ruined my plans.

Re: I have trouble thinking of good names

[the_mikor]

Arabelle.

dunno why but that's the name that struck me for the mom. :D

hope it helps.