Sweet and Spicy.

Nov 29, 2009 14:38

I am mostly vanilla. I think it is genetic. I am proud of it. And yet there is a bit of cinnamon buried at the bottom. A twisted, fiery, side of me that needs to be unleashed. In your presence I smolder just beneath the surface. Only my eyes give me away. Your ardent hand brushes against my skin, liquefying my frosty exterior. You seem unaware of ( Read more... )

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Well worded ladymockingbird November 30 2009, 01:34:25 UTC
I like this. Your writing is concise yet evocative.

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Re: Well worded serraphina November 30 2009, 05:02:33 UTC
Thank you, sis! I can't begin to tell you how much that means. Writing has never been one of my talents, but I am tired of not being able to express my deepest emotions. So I plan on continuing to write daily whether it is good or bad. I figure with more practice it will become easier for my to write.

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hekidanjo November 30 2009, 13:22:32 UTC
I would say that "delicious" is the perfect adjective for something so evocative.

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serraphina November 30 2009, 15:08:02 UTC
Wow, thanks so much! I guess writing straight from the core of who I am is a great way start off.

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hekidanjo November 30 2009, 16:17:01 UTC
It would seem so. It was good enough that initially I felt rather voyeuristic.

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serraphina November 30 2009, 17:21:43 UTC
* blush * After reading it again I can see why you felt that way. I guess there was more behind that then I realized. It was a completely innocent encounter between friends. Written from an emotional stand point.

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