Comments | sexineko: FIC: TRICK / Jaeho / CHP. 4 (Part 2)

sexineko

FIC: TRICK / Jaeho / CHP. 4 (Part 2)

Oct 13, 2009 04:22

Part two ~

( “Let me remind you who you belong to and maybe than you’ll stop running.” )

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sexineko October 16 2009, 01:19:42 UTC

well because Yunho is still working through the problems by himself, so when he finally gets the courage to say it out loud to Jae, maybe than can make up than. and have lots of makeup sex XD

seme!jae is awesomeness.

glad you liked the story, will try to update soon. Hopefully this weekend. ^^

thanks for reading and commenting♥

shimering2 October 16 2009, 13:58:21 UTC

I just finished all the chapters XD. At the moment, I just feel like wanting to shove the two into a small closet and make them both give each another warmfelt hugs and make up T_T. Hope both of them will be able to "heal" each another later.

Can't wait to see what happens next

sexineko October 17 2009, 03:49:03 UTC

Haha that thought crossed my mind too when I was stuck with writers block. XD!

Mmmmm most likely they will, but it might be a long road til complete happiness. We shall see what my fingers type out. ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting♥!

niki18 October 16 2009, 16:48:24 UTC

I need to go back reading Chapter 1. BRB

niki18 October 17 2009, 08:38:50 UTC

Ah I remember now. I was reading the previous chapter long ago, but afraid of the unfortunate ending. I like the way you portray Jae and Yun here. To me,they actually seem stubborn in real life as well.

sexineko October 17 2009, 20:29:36 UTC

Haha aw, well some of the chapters have good endings... I think.

Thank you! I quite literally write my characters the way I portray them and I can see all the qualities I write, in them.

Mm korean men are quite stubborn. Koreans are quite stubborn actually. I would know, I'm korean. ^^

thanks for reading and commenting♥

vizinga October 17 2009, 00:51:40 UTC

Yeee! You updated! I really like this fic and I enjoy so, so much seme JJ. Thanks for that, it is so, so refreshing.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

sexineko October 17 2009, 03:45:34 UTC

seme!jae is fun to write and yummy to think about. XD!

haha no problem. I've always written my stories the way I see them.

thanks for reading and commenting♥

uknowrous October 20 2009, 00:42:56 UTC

Wow. I love the insecurities coming out of this relationship. I'm glad you didn't make it all bubblegum and popcorn like something out of a fairy tale.

Finally Yunho is facing his demons. Hopefully they make up and JJ makes Yunho his slave for putting him through this emotional mess.

Wait... sorry that was my imagination acting up again.

sexineko October 20 2009, 15:19:01 UTC

Haha no no, I tried to make it as realistic as possible. And a lot of these are based on actual facts so~ ^^

*nods* hes finally kinda coming in terms with it, now we just gotta see if he takes that extra step forward towards Jae. =]

lol, now there's an idea....

thanks for reading and commenting dear♥