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[sexynviolent]

okay so i wrote this poem a while ago, dont ask em when, but i think its written fairly well, and i really like it, so what do you think?

Your Roosters RingingThat damned bloody luck

Comments

[barefootinsand]

i think its definately my entire friends page and you should use an lj cut :)
and its real good.

[white_gym_sock]

wow Dan Carr. that is a spectacular peice of writing.. amazing..

_manda_

[sayhellotokelly]

Telling tales of sex,
Their lies of glory.
Nothing happened with the girl across the street.

You know we've killed your dreams,
With our hopes.

those are my favorite parts. i liked your note passing action the other day.
you keep proving yourself as my favorite poet. i think "powerful" is the best way to describe your words. you should share that at poetry jam on friday. are you going to perform at the actual jam? <33 you should definitely.