This is the Paper that I wrote for Writing Workshop. Do comment..

[shades_of_gray]

ObsessionI am frozen. All I can do is stand here and stare. I wasn't expecting to see you. Not here, not now. I take a deep breath and close my eyes in hopes that you will disappear. I whisper for you to go away, for this to all be a dream, or a nightmare. I wish with all my heart that this weren't real, that this wasn't happening, but it is.

Comments

!WOW!

[wrongcoastkidd]

hey i kinda fumbled into your journal... i guess thats the point tho. this entry is amazing, its exactly how i feel about my ex. i read it with my mouth hanging to the floor the entire time, it was like reading about myself. your very talented. write me sometime, if you feel like talkin.

DAME

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[life_is_pain]

i thought that paper was awesome, very very good. you are able to express your feelings through words, which is sometimes very hard. i know it is for me heh. your a good writer.

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[shades_of_gray]

thanks :D
I tried to pour my heart out and I guess I was successful. But I agree with you, it can be very very hard.
thanks again-
Kryz