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usrnamesarecool April 22 2012, 04:13:40 UTC
That was awesome! Awesome and sad :( But amazingly written ♥

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shadowdancer11 April 22 2012, 04:15:54 UTC
Thanks :) Glad you like it and Chapter two should be up sometime late tomorrow early monday :)

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usrnamesarecool April 22 2012, 04:19:11 UTC
YAAAAAAAAY :D

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101giggities April 24 2012, 03:56:40 UTC
This is pretty awesome. It's sad and I can totally relate, I hate mushy couples:(
Anyway, I laughed cause it was 1D song when smosh hates them. I like them though, so this was pretty cool for me.
And I have to admit, I laughed at the last part. xD

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:O thestoryliveson April 24 2012, 15:38:48 UTC
I wasn't expecting that at the end xD This is so good and well written, I liked the inclusion of the oath too. Nothing else to say, apart from I'm looking forward to more.

EDIT: I forgot to say this, but I have ANOTHER compliment for you- the way the song was written in was awesome. Okay I'm going now :P

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9800andseagulls April 25 2012, 00:21:36 UTC
That was soooooooo unexpected! Now Im hooked!

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raeofthestage April 30 2012, 20:47:41 UTC
aw.... now im sad.... but I love the song...but im still sad.... but it was really good! ^.^

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shadowdancer11 May 1 2012, 03:55:56 UTC
Thank you :)

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