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Under Advisement [Chapter 4]

Mar 10, 2010 04:43

Title: Under Advisement (Chapter 4)
Pairing(s)/Characters: Friendship! JongKey, KhunYoung, Nichkhun/Minho, Onew, Jay/Key, Tiffany
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Crack, College AU, Romance
Summary: DATE NIGHT! Wooyoung and Nichkhun have their first date! And everything goes swimmingly, that is of course until the entire thing goes down the crapper. Jonghyun ( Read more... )

character: nichkhun, character: minho, fandom: 2pm, character: jay, khunyoung, character: jonghyun, under advisement, fandom: shinee, au, character: onew, character: wooyoung, character: key, crossover

Comments 78

mnol_heart March 10 2010, 10:19:03 UTC

MOTHER FUCKING YES UPDATE.

okkitten March 10 2010, 10:38:24 UTC

SPOT.

ILUSFM.

okkitten March 10 2010, 10:55:32 UTC

Ahhhhhhh fuck it was amazing! And I just got your hilarious reply to my comment on the previous chapter but holy shit it's 6 am and I can't be coherent. I will leave another giant epic comment tomorrow if it kills me. But I had to comment again saying I love you <33333333333

shamelessfics March 11 2010, 01:33:47 UTC

OMG ILU and your icon so hard you don't even know.

I'm so glad you liked it! TBH I was worried that this chapter was a little meh, but you enjoyed it so I guess I can unclench now.

Your comments are like a soft hug from the Baby Jesus so I am patiently awaiting your epic one.

Thanks for reading!

okkitten March 11 2010, 06:03:43 UTC

I love that icon too. pinkijooyin has amazing icons!

Gurrrrrrrrl I loved it. Unclench please!

Each one of your fic updates is like a new 8lb 6 oz newborn infant jesus in his golden fleece diapers has come into the world. I am happy to give you these comments as a thank you.

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mnol_heart March 10 2010, 10:44:10 UTC

It won't let me reply, so eff it.

YOU ARE MY FAVORITE. EVEN THOUGH IT'S LATE. IT'S WORTH IT.

Jay/Key is possibly the best pairing in the entire world. The whole of their interaction was mind blowingly amazing and wonderful. MOAR of them plz.

KhunYoung is SO CUTE in this. I'm in love with your Wooyoung so much I want to whisk him away and force him to marry me.

And I really like your Jonghyun in this too.

Does it seem like I love everything about your fic? CUZ I DO. SO MUCH.

updaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate ^^

shamelessfics March 11 2010, 01:40:51 UTC

yyyyeah sorry about that. I was trying to allow anonymous comments, so I pressed a button and the thing went all floopy (i believe that's the technical term for it)

I'm so glad you like Jay/Key! I've only seen one person write it passionability (a fanfic god in my eyes btw) and ever since then it's been my all time fave random pairing so I hope to do it some justice.

You are amazing, this comment is so sweet, ILU forever.

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shamelessfics March 11 2010, 01:43:11 UTC

YAAY! I'm really glad you like it! I'm loving all the Jay/Key appreciation. That ship needs more passengers (CWIDT? Carrie Bradshaw ain't got nothing on me!)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, you pretty little thing you!

wecansmile March 10 2010, 11:03:50 UTC

Hey there!

I love your fics enough to have made an account just to comment here. :) Your stories are freakin' amazing, man.

I found your journal a couple days ago, and I've been re-reading your other stories and the other three chapters like crazy in hopes that you would post a new chapter. Thank you for writing this!

Anyway I'm suuper thrilled with this chapter, but since you asked, it felt like Nichkhun's personality changed a bit too drastically right around the point when Key and Jonghyun brought in the dildos. Maybe it was just me though... It felt like he went from shy boy to... horny? LOL.

I am, however, really happy that you didn't make Khun and Wooyoung's date go completely smoothly. It just makes the story so much more interesting and you wrote that scene so well! :)

I'm going to be aching to read the next chapter! Keep writing! ^^

shamelessfics March 11 2010, 01:53:47 UTC

Ok, first ofall...OMG you made another account just to comment?! You are amaaaazing! Thank you! Seriously. I'll friend you ASAP!

Thanks so much for reading the other stories. I'm so glad you like them! I know this update took forever, so I appreciate you sticking around.

And yeah re-reading I guess you're right about Nichkhun. I want to flesh his character out more, because I was afraid the innocent goof thing would get tired. But i kinda jumped the gun there. Or maybe i overestimate the power of dildoes (or you underestimate it LOL) Thank you gobs for the concrit btw! You're awesome.

I really can't let anything go smoothly for Nichkhun, so I'm glad you appreciated the date scene LOL!

This comment is amazingly sweet and wonderful on a million different levels so thank you! I hope you keep reading and I hope you keep commenting!