Here's the first actual chapter of my story, I don't think it's very good, but some constructive criticism would be great, thank you. <3
Chapter 1
BrodyThe first day of school, September 9, 2004. A new life, a new school, a new beginning, a new city, a new state, and time to create a new me. I don’t want to be the same kid I was in eighth
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