Clean Break

Nov 08, 2012 17:31

Title: Clean Break ( Read more... )

lu han, hunhan, sehun

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13aholic November 9 2012, 17:56:35 UTC
MY FEELINGS ARE EVERYWHERE !@#$%^&SGHJKL /keyboard smashing

This is just so beautiful! You did an amazing job T__________T
The birthday message really had me close to tears to be honest, because I saw myself there a year ago, sending a happy birthday text to my ex, even though he already moved on. Thank God Sehun hadn't, he was still waiting, and just because Sehun's bday is actually 8 days earlier, if it was the other way around i'm pretty sure Sehun would also send a happy bday text to Luhan, and then the rest would just happen the exact same way!

Thank you dear, I love this!

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shayepuree November 10 2012, 01:03:26 UTC
That feeling sucks so much, bahhhh. Yeah. Really wanted to try to work that weird mix of hope and confusion and futility into this fic, and I figured birthday texts were the way to go. They can mean so much or so little -- and they had to work out which this was.
I agree -- if their birthdays were flipped, Sehun would've sent the text first. Though I'm glad their birthdays do fall the way they do, because I think Lu Han would be a lot less likely to admit that he missed Sehun, because he didn't think he deserved to, since he was the one who walked away.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a nice comment!!

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mint_whispers November 9 2012, 22:36:28 UTC
THAT LAST LINE HAS GOT ME FLIPPING TABLES IN HAPPY HUNHAN FEELSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

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shayepuree November 10 2012, 01:04:42 UTC
GOOD BECAUSE THAT WAS MY GOAL~
Tried to compress as much fluff as I could into that last line especially, to make up for all the angst. xD

Thank you for reading!

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yuraxchan November 10 2012, 14:32:54 UTC
Just beautiful ♥
I feel like crying though haha ! But it's a good happy ending so it's fine :D
Thank you for sharing :)

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shayepuree November 10 2012, 14:51:17 UTC
Aww! Make them happy tears, then, because they're back together and Lu Han never runs away again.
Thanks for reading!

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k_omorebi November 13 2012, 15:19:14 UTC
dsajfkdsfja love! so happy they got back together at the ending keke

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shayepuree November 13 2012, 19:46:43 UTC
Of course they did~ I couldn't be that mean to my HunHan babies. Sehun was waiting for Lu Han the entire time. He spent more time at that coffee shop than he'd ever be likely to admit, the cutie. xD

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^_^

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crossing_by December 11 2013, 12:01:50 UTC
Love ... love ... love
hunhan is love

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