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FIC: And It Feels Like Falling

May 12, 2009 20:42

Title: And It Feels Like Falling
Author: shelbecat
Rating: T (PG-13)
Pairing: Kris/Danny
Notes: Occurs before/during the Top 4 Performance show.

( There’s a grin on his face, like he knows the answer to a secret question, and Kris thinks, for just a second, that maybe he’ll get to find out too. )

ai, fic

Comments 18

1407graymalkin May 12 2009, 23:34:30 UTC

All night while they preform this is all I'll think about.

Danny figures it was Kris’s way of getting the upper hand. Of course that is in between stomach-turning thoughts of ‘Oh my Jesus, does this mean I’m gay?’ and ‘What would Sophia say?’.

And it will ruin it ALLLLLLL

shelbecat May 13 2009, 12:23:48 UTC

I live to ruin things for you, you know this!!!

1407graymalkin May 13 2009, 13:51:45 UTC

Every time he stood with Ryan I had this running inner monologue about how Danny wondered how Ryan kept it quiet.

like_i_love_you May 13 2009, 04:07:56 UTC

I don't care how popular this pairing is or isn't. I9 read it despite not being big on Danny/anybody. I liked it. The story line and writing is very well done.

shelbecat May 13 2009, 12:22:20 UTC

Thank you so much, even despite the pairing! It's not a pairing I would like either, I don't think, it just came out because they were paired together in the duet. Glad you liked!

allstarzs May 13 2009, 08:19:28 UTC

I am anti-Kris with every fibre of my being but when I saw the pairing it grabbed my intrest... OMG that was amazing. Incredibly well written and an amazing storyline. Just wow.

shelbecat May 13 2009, 12:23:05 UTC

Anti-Kris...but I don't have an icon for that!?! :)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it anyway - lol. It was just the duet - sparked something in me.

thethingiswhat May 13 2009, 10:28:47 UTC

I was totally expecting to hate this because I am not a Kris person but this was wonderful. The story idea was great and it was beautifully written!

shelbecat May 13 2009, 12:23:31 UTC

Totally expecting to hate and you read it anyway - I LOVE IT!!!!

I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

gimp_homegurl May 14 2009, 15:22:59 UTC

If he could feel as comfortable in Kris’s grasp as the steel shaft of the microphone looks in Kris’s hand.

Read that and my mouth just kind of dropped. WHAT!? I was like, "Did she really just use the word 'Shaft'?" *blink* Oh so suggestive!

Kris closes his eyes and thinks…it feels just like falling.

Awwee, best romantic line in the entire world. SO sweet. *swoons*

He reciprocates, awkward and clumsy, and immediately plasters his hand to his leg again. Safe.

When I read this all I could think about was my younger brother. All you needed was for Kris' tongue to stick out just a little bit because he's thinking so hard, and it would have been completely Damon. Makes me feel an emotional connection to the confused guy.

And then the kiss is over and there’s a breathy sigh against his cheek, Danny’s forehead mashed against his, and words hanging in the blackness, “Don’t give up.”ACK! So damn sexy and wow... the line and the many meanings it could have. I really loved it. ^_ ( ... )

shelbecat May 14 2009, 18:36:57 UTC

Well just wait 'til you see what I'm doing now!!! (I'm a monster!)

Your feedback is always so lovely. I'm so glad you read and enjoyed it even without watching the show. I'm completely hooked now and can't stop. Kris must win!!!

gimp_homegurl May 14 2009, 18:59:47 UTC

Ooo, more writing goodies in the works?

You know I think I'd read anything of yours. Doesn't really matter what it is. I'll have to take your word for it on Kris though. *nods*