The Theory of Narrative Causality (3e/5ish)
anonymous
May 24 2011, 19:56:20 UTC
'I am so very sorry,' he whispered, and I could have laughed. He had not understood - eight years of partnership and he had not understood a thing just yet. He presupposed me to be driven to exasperation by his antics, and to follow him into his cases, into his dangers, into his life, out of a misguided sense of guilt and adoration. It was a very pretty case of theorizing ahead of the data.
'Self-centered fool,' I said, affectionally enough. He turned wide eyes on me, but I nosed closer - rather like a dog, if the truth be told - and set my chin upon the sharp snag of his shoulder, dusty and dirty as it was. He drew in a breath, very softly and very fast, and then he said nothing at all. I only wished, at this moment, that I had paper and pen to set the morning down - for his eyes and his nose and his mouth, the fine hairs at his nape. I wanted to write him down entirely, be it for the last time.
The dawn dragged on, but I only saw it in his face."
Re: The Theory of Narrative Causality (3e/5ish)
anonymous
May 14 2012, 05:18:20 UTC
Okay, this may be weird to leave a comment in the middle of the fic a year after it was posted, but this link doesn't work anymore? I am only really disappointed in myself for not having read sooner, but I'm hoping someone (authoranon?) has another link for it?
'Self-centered fool,' I said, affectionally enough. He turned wide eyes on me, but I nosed closer - rather like a dog, if the truth be told - and set my chin upon the sharp snag of his shoulder, dusty and dirty as it was. He drew in a breath, very softly and very fast, and then he said nothing at all. I only wished, at this moment, that I had paper and pen to set the morning down - for his eyes and his nose and his mouth, the fine hairs at his nape. I wanted to write him down entirely, be it for the last time.
The dawn dragged on, but I only saw it in his face."
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Hey internet, whoever writes this gets my imaginary firstborn...!
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there are these two BNFs in my fandom
who just keep flirting and keep being adorably dorky together
I don't even think they realize it
so on behalf of the entire fandom, you two
cut the bullshit out
and just fuck already
thank you
signed,
all of us
Found through google search: "2zirpqf.png"
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