One Touch

Dec 10, 2009 19:35

ONE TOUCH ( Read more... )

my hwmnbn, writing, lj idol

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onda_bianca December 11 2009, 04:35:56 UTC
This was beautiful...love, sex, is sometimes strange and unexpected.

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sherriola December 11 2009, 04:56:32 UTC
Yes, it was strange and unexpected. It fulfilled everything I hoped and feared it would, the good and the bad, for over six years. I'm glad you liked it.

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sherriola December 11 2009, 04:58:25 UTC
Yes, it can take only one touch. And after all the joy and grief, if he came back I'd be there with him again and wouldn't care. because he was absolutely all I ever wanted. And I was going for hot and beautiful, so I'm glad you feel that way about it. i'm smiling!

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baxaphobia December 11 2009, 10:49:13 UTC
This must have been difficult for you to write. Hugs my friend.

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sherriola December 11 2009, 15:45:57 UTC
Yes, it's hard, but it's kind of healing in a way. I wrote this scene out, the entire scene that is with dialog and the events that follow going into the bedroom, years ago, to keep it fresh in my memory, and someday i'll put it in raindrops in more detail too. This writing helps get the stuffed emotion out of the way so I can write more easily in a strange way. If that makes sense. Never dreamed that asshole would give me so much fodder for my work! sigh.

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mstrobel December 11 2009, 11:20:56 UTC
Absolutely beautiful and so beautifully written!

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sherriola December 11 2009, 15:47:19 UTC
thank you so much! That means a lot. It's mostly true, except for some details I left out, and it was actually good to write, not too painful. I'm so very glad you enjoyed it!

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shadowwolf13 December 11 2009, 21:38:51 UTC
Mmm, very well done! :)

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