One Touch

Dec 10, 2009 19:35

ONE TOUCH ( Read more... )

my hwmnbn, writing, lj idol

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dreamchaser December 13 2009, 19:07:58 UTC
Very well done.

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notbatman December 14 2009, 15:29:02 UTC
This was beautiful, very well told!

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sherriola December 14 2009, 16:00:59 UTC
Thank you so much! i'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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jenandbronze December 15 2009, 07:08:33 UTC
Wow... just wow, non-fiction means not real? right? I get that confused all the time!

I could picture everything, but I don't think I've heard a human "purr" to someone before, I had quite a wild imagination thinking of that one! LOL!

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sherriola December 15 2009, 14:27:20 UTC
No, Jen, nonfiction means real, true. this is a true story. and yes, people do purr, in a way, particularly in moments of physical intimacy. It's quite wonderful.

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jenandbronze December 15 2009, 17:11:57 UTC
Wow, this was extremely well-written. Not usually the pieces I enjoy, but the writing style kept me reading *grin*

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sherriola December 15 2009, 17:27:02 UTC
It's an amazing compliment if you read it and enjoyed it, in spite of not usually liking the style. It was an incredibly special day in my life with someone I loved very much and will probably love all my life, though I'll never see him again. Your response to this means a great deal.

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walkertxkitty December 15 2009, 22:25:43 UTC
I like the tenderness and care you put into crafting this entry. It's a sensitive subject and one which could have been tawdry and cheap but you made it into a lovely intimate moment. Well done!

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