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kanarek13 June 10 2016, 23:42:21 UTC
Awww, this is so wonderful on so many levels :D It's pure delight to have a brand new wee!Neal story posted \o/ Because wee!Neal is always irresistible :D

*happy sigh* You already know I love this to bits, this was such a difficult season for the boys, even more frustrating because all they really had to do was TALK, damnit! LOL... so this is such a glorious way of allowing them to do just that. And of course poor little Neal is so very, very poor that each paragraph practically melts me all over again :D I wonder if I can shape this into a teddy bear of my own and just cuddle the stuffing out of it because D"AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW ♥

*tacklehugs* Look at this - 18k!!! Go you :D

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sherylyn June 10 2016, 23:44:33 UTC
Awww!! THANK YOU soooo much!! This seriously would have probably never happened without your help and encouragement!

And LOL if you find a way to make it into a teddy bear, get me one!! LOL!!!

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china_shop June 11 2016, 00:10:45 UTC
Yayay, you posted! \o/!!!!!! *twirls you and twirls you*

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sherylyn June 11 2016, 00:19:37 UTC
Yes!! FINALLY!! And THANK YOU x infinity for helping so much!! *twirls you*

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hurinhouse June 11 2016, 02:14:43 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. so cute and adorable and painful. why couldn't they have talked like this in canon?? oh right cuz eastin ruined peter, that's why.

(ok sorry, off my soapbox... )

this is adorable. the image of little neal with his huge clothes (& then the hot image of our grownup boy all nekkid - yum).

great artwork K!

thanks for posting this - write more!

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sherylyn June 11 2016, 02:30:43 UTC
LOL I'm right there with you on that soapbox!! I think it's why this literally came from a dream at some point (aspects of it, at least) -- my brain was trying to fix them in my sleep ;-)

LOL The clothes bit was really fun to play with. I finally decided to just make his li'l boy clothes disappear, rather than put him through the literal pain of trying to get out of them! LOL!!

I'm mulling over some time-stamp (or similar) things with this. I really wanted this to be solely Neal's POV on it all, but I think I'd like to do some things about Peter, El and Mozzie finding out/interacting with li'l Neal some more, too :)

Thanks bunches!!

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pipilj June 11 2016, 06:59:51 UTC
Aww this is adorable, love the guys finally had a honest conversation with one another.

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sherylyn June 11 2016, 21:00:43 UTC
Thanks so much!! <3

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dennih23 June 11 2016, 13:11:54 UTC
What a wonderful story! The boys needed that honest conversation - like El states, for two smart men, they never considered just talking to each other. Our boys may always have faith in each other, but sometimes their anger gets the best of them.

Once again, this is such a terrific story and I love how you resolved getting them to talk to each other.

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sherylyn June 11 2016, 20:53:58 UTC
Awww! Thanks so much!! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and it "worked" for you for them to finally find a way to just *talk*!! Thanks for such a lovely comment!! <3

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