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shibaaaaaaal

Zochelle

Apr 18, 2010 01:50

Title: Untitled
Pairing: Rochelle/Zoey
Rating: R18 (explicit sex)
Notes: I finally forced my boyfriend to write this femslash! Non canon with The Passing of course (when the hell it coming out already. Jeez Valve Time.) Update: Ooh the Passing is coming out next week. Noooo Murphy's law meant they'd pick exam week, I shoulda known.

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slash, left 4 dead 2, fanfiction

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julianatheorize April 18 2010, 02:39:59 UTC

YES someone else wrote Zoey/Rochelle! This needs to happen more often.

shibaaaaaaal April 18 2010, 12:53:59 UTC

I know... too bad there's not much of an audience for it. And I think Nellis is a bit stale at the moment. Here's hoping that the Passing will inspire people to write more unconventional pairings

... ryousuke_rokuke April 19 2010, 17:19:25 UTC

owchie, SEX! WHAT IS THIS, MOOOTHERRRRRR--okay just kidding.
NORMAL COMMENT, MAYBE, LIKE RIGHT NAOWH.

... okay first thought;
I actually liked how what LED to the sex was described in between sex scenes. (Y) *teehee* or well just the past really, then, i suppose, like, if we have to go into details... ANYHOW it wasn't PWP-reeking so yeah. I dunno, I kinda like it when stories have a plot.
O___________________________o
OKAY NEXT

It was great how the beginning was tied to the end. Yeah. I kinda like it when stories does that, if they're not completely chronological that is. Soooo yeah. Uh, thumbs-up?

I also like that it's not "idyllic" (oh yes random kinks and fancy orgasms! or just you know... "They were lying in a bed filled with crimson flower petals--"--and then they stare into each others' eyes for 91829128468364583538467587 pages before sloooowly reaching out for, yeah whatever really, could be a goddamn finger, and *KABLARFGH* then cut to next scene when they're done and cuddly!!!1111one LIKE MY STORIES!! Which is why I ( ... )

Re: ... shibaaaaaaal April 20 2010, 11:07:17 UTC

My bf loved this comment! He said, quote, "it was funny." =P Sorry he doesn't have anything substantial to say, but he doesn't have the comment writing prowess that you have. It's a sad state of affairs.

Oh, and I must tell you that the little Nellis implication there was on purpose. Hehehe.

I personally thought the switching between different times was a bit weird, but also interesting. Maybe a bit too controversial and innovative for a SLASHFIC ON THE INTERNETZ though. Oooo

If being a braindead fangirl is wrong then I DONT WANNA BE RIGHT

Re: ... shibaaaaaaal April 20 2010, 11:09:52 UTC

Oh and he thinks we should have a three-way speed writing session (at first I thought he was talking about a threesome OH GOD NO *brain bleach*) Anyway, as if you'd ever want to do that. I mean, you'd just be like, "ohhhhh my writing is too screwed up and crappy!" Amirite!? XD

Re: ... ryousuke_rokuke April 20 2010, 11:17:42 UTC

So you mean I am a COMMENT PRO!? *teeheeeee* I'm just good at babbling. I mean, yeah. O__o MOWAHUAHUAHUAHAUHUADHAUWHALKWDLKAWD *school is boring*

totally. and I liked it. (Y) Twahargh!

ooooooooooooooo well MAYBE... (SPACE PEOPLEEEEE) but i still liked it SO THARR. :D MANBOY MANBOY YOU CAN CALL ME MANBOY...

OKAY WELL STAY WRONG WITH ME, AHAHAHA, WHERE THE GRASS IS GREENER AND WHATEVER--WAOJELAWKMELAKWMELKWAE. it's funnier being wrong. :D

uuuh a threesome -- no. HAHAHHAHA i mean how would it even---okay no just no, and with that being said... WHY DO YOU SAY IT LIKE THAT. NOW I, LIKE, TOTALLY HAVE TO SAY YEAH TO THE IDEA. FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF well no actually it could be fun, but well. You've seen my writing (Y) and it won't get better so. Yeah.

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