Comments | shieldmaid1: Going Down, Chapter Ten: Starry Night

shieldmaid1

Going Down, Chapter Ten: Starry Night

Nov 27, 2006 19:24

Hey, y'all--Sorry about being even later than I promised yesterday. It's been a bit of a traumatic day, as you already know. But here it is; hope you enjoy and thanks for reading ( Read more... )

brokeback mountain, going down

Comments 21

NOOOOOOO! 9_blind_crows November 28 2006, 00:55:30 UTC

NO! Damn Randall! Shit!

Hey, I had to read this because of your sweet dedication. Just loved your description of Ennis taking jack in his arms, of laying his head in Jack's lap, etc. SIGH.

Thank you. That was great to read; almost forgot about my experiment whhile I was reading it!

XOXOXOXOXO

Re: NOOOOOOO! shieldmaid1 November 29 2006, 01:43:06 UTC

Hey Maggie--I can't tell you how much it means to me that you've read my little fic. ;) Thank you so much!! Hope you are well; take care.

xx Jen

trekfan November 28 2006, 01:16:41 UTC

Is that bastard, Randall up to something? keeping Jack from seeing Ennis. Cause I'll take care of RANDALL real QUICK!

more please :D

shieldmaid1 November 29 2006, 01:43:31 UTC

Don't worry . . . I think we'll find Jack can take care of himself. ;) Thanks for reading!

trekfan November 29 2006, 02:44:01 UTC

You're welcome. I get very protective of the guys as you can see :D

Damn pearl_1 November 28 2006, 02:11:37 UTC

Shit, damn, hell....... that damn Randall !! He better
watch it !!!

Karen (peanut)

Re: Damn shieldmaid1 November 29 2006, 03:05:42 UTC

Oh, I think Randall will find he'd better watch his back--or pay the price. ;) Thanks for reading!

midget_size November 28 2006, 02:44:07 UTC

Oh no he didn't! Jack just said he'd see Ennis in an hour! Julia better fix this! Grrr.

But he was a star, fixed and hanging in space, his light having traveled through the cold, echoing emptiness millennia ago.

You win. ;)

shieldmaid1 November 29 2006, 03:06:12 UTC

I'm really liking Julia at the moment, so I think she'll have a part to play in this somehow. Thanks for reading. :)

gamma_ray00 November 28 2006, 02:51:36 UTC

That bastard Randall...WTF is he trying to pull? UGH!!!
Other than that bit...I loved this update...Ennis is so sweet...you write him so well...I could feel his discomfort when he was telling Jack the "story"....but he got it out...and it was so delish..just what Jack needed to hear.
NOW...what is that rat bastard gonnna say to Jack? He is going to lie lie lie..isn't he?
Please save Jack from that lech..:-)

shieldmaid1 November 29 2006, 03:06:49 UTC

Randall is a slimy guy, I agree--but Jack is more than man enough to handle him. So to speak. ;) Thanks for reading!