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luvjacknasty December 5 2006, 01:20:10 UTC
I was so glad that Jack punched Randall and then Randall got arrested! That was one hell of a conversation Jack and Ennis had- HOT! I can't wait for Jack to get back to the station!

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shieldmaid1 December 6 2006, 15:22:00 UTC
Glad you liked it. It was the perfect conversation for me to be a fly on the wall . . . . Thanks for reading! :)

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GASP! smiles_a_lot December 5 2006, 02:28:06 UTC
Uh boy...wow...hawt...can't...talk..breathing...not..so.
good...Jenn..you..rock! - Em

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Re: GASP! shieldmaid1 December 6 2006, 15:22:28 UTC
Haha! Glad you enjoyed it. Me too. :) Thanks for reading, and I hope to update again soon. xx

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joetheone December 5 2006, 04:03:01 UTC
Very hot and sexy two way radio sex it was not really phone sex so it was really hot and cool. Hmm wonder who could have been listening it made me get out my two way radio love to listen in on those hot firemen and police men and any man in a uniform. OH NO giving too much away of my fantasy. Ok the Randall part was freaky but real and glad those cops came and took him away. Joe

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shieldmaid1 December 6 2006, 15:22:54 UTC
Yes, there really *is* something about a man in uniform, I agree. Thanks so much for reading. ;)

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trekfan December 5 2006, 04:46:51 UTC
WOW first Randall was being grabby (the NERVE!) I'm glad he was arrested. That bastard.

I loved the phone sex (or radio sex) Don't worry about copying someone you had your own take on it. and I loved every HOT min of it. Yep you guys keep them safe for each other.

OOOO I got the tingles reading this

wonderful!

more please.

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shieldmaid1 December 6 2006, 15:23:39 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! I tried to make the radio scene different this time. Thanks for reading--

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9_blind_crows December 5 2006, 07:25:28 UTC
Oh sheeit that was hawt!

Dayum! And I am sorry you feel it is incumbent upon you to have to quote every single person on earth who ever did phone/radio/telegraph/braille/sign language sex or whatever. Leave off those petty dumbassess who cry boo hoo over that stuff for God's sake; let them go get a LIFE.

But that radio sex was hawt. Was grinning like a fool the whole time reading it.

Thank you, sweetie.

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9_blind_crows December 5 2006, 07:30:14 UTC
Added to note: I know Jenna never cared about that so-called plagiarism stuff; I don't mean her--she is too much of an adult to nitpick about absurdities, I think.

Also: like I'm the only one in the world who ever wrote about abuse.

None of us are always at every step particularly original in substance; it's the way in which an author uniquely draws an old topic that makes it new again. Any mature reader knows that.

Okay, off soapbox now!

XOXOXOOXOXOXOXOXO

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shieldmaid1 December 6 2006, 15:25:40 UTC
Hey, Mag--It means so much to me that you read my story. Hugs! I know, I'm just feeling paranoid about the whole thing after the ridiculous s&*t of last week. Thanks so much for your support and kind words.

Love, Jen

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