Oh that was just scrummy Jen, I could read that phone sex scene over and over it was so hot.
“OK. Just move your hand ‘round a little bit, rub your stomach real gentle. Want you to be nice ‘n warm. Can you do that for me?”
Dont know why that particular line got me, but it did. It was like, something sweet and lovely in between all the hot and horny stuff, and I love it all in equal measures. You really do have a wonderful way of evoking their feelings for each other Jen, its so good to read. And I agree with others who say that your take on the phone sex is unique to your story and your writing, and that's all that needs to be said.
So glad Randall got taken away in cuffs - god, he's a creep. He gave me the creeps when he was touching Jack's thigh - hands off, that thigh is being saved for someone else!!! I wonder if Jack will tell Ennis about Randall?
Loving this story so much Jen. Oh, and that word "thrumming" - yep, totally perfect. lol
Shieldmaid1, not to take anything from you - but mentioned a story (Del Mar Painting) - I don't recall that one do you think I might be interested and if so where would one find it. NOW, on to a few comments for this chapter.
My heart leaped for joy at that first paragraph - really liked it even with my knowing that Randall had something in store - it's so good to see Jack happy again.
hmmm, wonder how much the investigators heard. LOL
OMG, hard to imagine Ennis taking off his boxers with another guy in the room, even if he's way cross the room and snoring like a train. LOL
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“OK. Just move your hand ‘round a little bit, rub your stomach real gentle. Want you to be nice ‘n warm. Can you do that for me?”
Dont know why that particular line got me, but it did. It was like, something sweet and lovely in between all the hot and horny stuff, and I love it all in equal measures. You really do have a wonderful way of evoking their feelings for each other Jen, its so good to read. And I agree with others who say that your take on the phone sex is unique to your story and your writing, and that's all that needs to be said.
So glad Randall got taken away in cuffs - god, he's a creep. He gave me the creeps when he was touching Jack's thigh - hands off, that thigh is being saved for someone else!!! I wonder if Jack will tell Ennis about Randall?
Loving this story so much Jen. Oh, and that word "thrumming" - yep, totally perfect. lol
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Love, Jen
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Now it's about time our boys see each other again.
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My heart leaped for joy at that first paragraph - really liked it even with my knowing that Randall had something in store - it's so good to see Jack happy again.
hmmm, wonder how much the investigators heard. LOL
OMG, hard to imagine Ennis taking off his boxers with another guy in the room, even if he's way cross the room and snoring like a train. LOL
Thanks for the update. HOT.
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