Going Down, Epilogue: Fixing It

Jun 28, 2007 17:24

Pairing: Ennis/Jack ( Read more... )

brokeback mountain, going down

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:41:36 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it.

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Going Down cwby30 June 28 2007, 23:38:35 UTC
Afternoon.

Well, wonderful ending to a wonderful story. The rings! Great minds think alike, especially when they're in love. Glad to hear about the ranch that Ennis works at, and will become foreman of if he hasn't already [yes, I do have "Gift of the Magi"!]. Liked how they were able to get away for a weekend, which is a whole lot better than they did in OS...difference is in OS they got away from their lies to have the truth of each other for a short time, while here they already have that truth full time, and took some time to get away from the demands on their time that interfere with that.

Glad you have some ideas from Jack and Ennis still rattling around and wanting to be written. Will like to read about how they got where they are, and about their kids, and more of their adventures.

Thanks again for this story.

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Re: Going Down shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:42:37 UTC
Thank you! I like the comparison with the OS here. I'm sorry it took me so long to reply to your comment, and I'm about to go out of town for a couple of weeks, but I'm hoping to post some one-shots in August. : )

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ankara28 June 28 2007, 23:38:45 UTC

A wonderful story, a happy ending,
Thank you.
Ankara28

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:42:51 UTC
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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my_lil_darlin June 29 2007, 01:22:27 UTC
What a sweet ending; I ate it up with a spoon! Wow.

Thanks so much for finishing this story, which I've followed closely from the beginning. This was a wonderful gift you gave us, in the final chapter and epilogue.

Will you be writing more for Jack and Ennis? I hope so! Thanks again.

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:43:19 UTC
I will be writing more, yes, though not until August (I'm about to go out of town). Thank you so much for reading; I really appreciate your kind comments.

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Thank you joetheone June 29 2007, 02:48:24 UTC
This was a wonderful story and to end it with the two boys in a lake sharing a very special time together and to end it with the exchange of the rings well the circle of love that never has an end in sight was beautiful. You did a very nice job with this entire story and I thank you for sharing it with all of us here in the Brokeback world of hoping and praying for a better world around us. Joe

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Re: Thank you shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:44:03 UTC
Thank you so much for reading--I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll be returning to them again for some one-shots in August, I hope. :)

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