Going Down, Epilogue: Fixing It

Jun 28, 2007 17:24

Pairing: Ennis/Jack ( Read more... )

brokeback mountain, going down

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going down epilogue bijou16 June 29 2007, 04:58:28 UTC
hi shieldmaid1,
i just loved this story and i am so sorry to see it go.
thank you for finishing it and giving us a happy ending for the boys.
i loved the exchange of rings and the i love yous and ennis wanting jack to make love to him.
i loved this part:
He allowed his head to hang down, his heart pounding and his breath thundering in and out, until he felt Ennis’s hand on his cheek. He looked up, and saw the other man’s eyes full and shining, warm with love as he caressed the side of Jack’s face.
just beautiful, the whole thing.
i hope you are going to write more.
teresa

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Re: going down epilogue shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:44:35 UTC
Thank you!! Your comments are lovely. I will be writing some one-shots in August; see you then! :)

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sweetje June 29 2007, 08:07:26 UTC
Love this story so much!
Thank You!
Debra

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:44:50 UTC
Thanks for reading--I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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katecaton June 29 2007, 08:08:07 UTC
This line particularly touched me;
Finally Ennis whispered, “Thank you. I can’t never say it enough, but . . . thank you.”
I always thought that was what Ennis was trying to say when he said "Jack, I swear". It was beautiful to imagine those words spoken at the end of a ripping story like yours. Thanks for sharing it!
Love Kate

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:45:25 UTC
That's exactly what I was thinking, actually . . . if we could somehow hear what Ennis really wanted to say--this would be it. Thanks for reading! :)

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poppyhoney_67 June 29 2007, 08:16:50 UTC
“Thank you. I can’t never say it enough, but . . . thank you.”

Gulp.

God, Jen, just those few words from Ennis sum up how he really feels for Jack. I loved this epilogue, sneaking into their lives and seeing how they're getting on..and it seems as if they're doing ok, more than ok even. Loved the exchange of rings, the love making on the water, it was perfect. *sigh*

I'm going to miss this story so much, but I've loved being part of it. Thank you.

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:45:56 UTC
Thank you so much, honey! I couldn't have done it without you. Some one-shots coming in August, I hope. xx Jen

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shieldmaid1 July 19 2007, 22:46:39 UTC
Oh, the magazine . . . well, that might very well end up in a one-shot sometime soon. :) Thanks for reading! Jen

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