Comments | shieldmaid1: Going Down, Chapter Three: Family Man

shieldmaid1

Going Down, Chapter Three: Family Man

Sep 27, 2006 16:02

Pairing: Ennis/Jack ( Read more... )

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shieldmaid1 October 6 2006, 14:33:36 UTC

Thank you!! (just catching up on comments this morning, as you see. . . ) I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. Stay tuned-- ;)

luvjacknasty September 28 2006, 00:36:49 UTC

Another gorgeous chapter! I started to tear up in the first few lines. I know Jack won't be able to stay away from Ennis and the fact that he has the knapsack will lead him back (I hope). Hopefully the fact that Jack stood his ground so early on will lead them to be together that much sooner. I'm looking forward to Chapter 4!

shieldmaid1 October 6 2006, 14:34:24 UTC

I'm glad to see that I haven't destroyed everyone's hope. Jack's a decisive man--but also a faithful one. We'll see where that leads him. . . . ;)

poppyhoney_67 September 28 2006, 08:12:02 UTC

A beautiful but heartbreakingly sad chapter, Jen, but your writing is just incredible. The sex scene between Ennis and Jack was just so gorgeous - very hot, but very very romantic. Loved the fact that Ennis wanted to be held by Jack, to be taken by Jack, and when he said "its nice being here with you", I thought my heart would melt ( ... )

shieldmaid1 October 6 2006, 14:35:23 UTC

Thanks, C. I'm so glad you liked it! xx

midget_size October 1 2006, 19:13:30 UTC

Awww no! No wonder you said to trust you. I trust you, I really do, I promise. But I'm gonna require you to hurry with an update, please and thank you. ;) Maybe Ennis will come to his senses and go to Texas to get Jack? Pretty pretty please?

shieldmaid1 October 6 2006, 14:36:13 UTC

This question occupies all my free time lately: what will Ennis do? .... I think we know what he wants. ;)

vln_bbmfan October 1 2006, 19:17:39 UTC

I found the link to this story on the Wranglers site and I'm so glad I did.
I've always wondered what would have happened if Jack had said no to the back of beyond and demanded all or nothing from Ennis. Would Ennis find it impossible to give Jack up, or would he be willing to go back to his life and never make any move to follow his heart, like he did for that first four years. Will Jack have to 'cave' and make the next move, or is losing Jack a second time (thankfully, in this AU not to death) going to be enough to spur him into action, despite his fears?
I can't wait to find out how you will get them to resolve this situation...I read your disclaimer and if these first three chapters are any indication, I definitely trust you to do right by the guys. :-)

shieldmaid1 October 6 2006, 14:36:46 UTC

Thanks very much for your kind words. They are so appreciated. Please keep reading!