New story: Pomp and Circumstances

[shieldmaid1]

Pomp and CircumstancesChapter 1 - Office Hours

Comments

[camillar]

Yay! This is so good already! Love anal retentive Ennis :) Looking forward to more!
Camilla

[shieldmaid1]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I am working on chapter two even now . . . . :)

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying it. :)

Such a great start!

[agrist]

I can't wait until the next chapter! I love how E has already realized that there's something special going on. You portrayed Jack just as he should be in the academic environment. Perfect.

Alesia

Re: Such a great start!

[shieldmaid1]

I drew pretty heavily on my own experiences here--but there hasn't been any pairing nearly as hot as these two in my workplace! :) Thanks for reading, and stay tuned for chapter two.

[torry28]

I already love it, love the idea of Jack taking charge and Ennis already smitten by the most beautiful eyes he ever seen, and forgetting another pair of blue eyes.
Thank you for making me smile at Anita doing her best to fish for answers, do you have a girlfriend?
Hugs
Torry

[shieldmaid1]

Thank you, Torry, I'm glad you like it! I wanted Anita to be both in-charge and vulnerable, since she thinks maybe she can hit on new, apparently single Ennis . . . she may have another think coming. :)

[sienata]

neat beginning... i love the contrast... ennis is so freakin' anal and jack is all over the place. i'm glad that ennis isn't turned off by that. your descriptions were great, i'm really looking forward to what happens at the Cellar. s.

[shieldmaid1]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I am working on chapter two now, inspired by your own hard work lately on BFF. Stay tuned!