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New story: Pomp and Circumstances

Jun 25, 2008 22:41

Pomp and CircumstancesChapter 1 - Office Hours ( Read more... )

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poppyhoney_67 June 26 2008, 08:31:27 UTC

Oh this is great Jen, I'm loving it already. Ennis with his obsessional ways and Jack with his chaotic ones....opposites attract! I am really intrigued how this is going to go and I hope we get to see them together in the pub? Also, I'm intrigued by the picture in Ennis's wallet, anything to be worried about? Mmmm, yes, you've got me hooked, cant wait for more!

shieldmaid1 June 29 2008, 02:23:50 UTC

Thanks, Christine! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. You know I've been thinking about this story for a long time. Yes, next chapter will take place partly in the pub and partly back at work. Hope I can get it posted on Monday sometime. :)

suzysue2 June 26 2008, 09:23:34 UTC

Yeah - great start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

shieldmaid1 June 29 2008, 02:24:07 UTC

Thank you! Next chapter will be up soon.

tmn1966 June 26 2008, 11:51:25 UTC

I like this! Good beginning. I can't wait to see what happens next. I like your descriptive writing.

Thanks so much for sharing!

Teri

shieldmaid1 June 29 2008, 02:24:55 UTC

I'm glad you like it! I had so much fun writing it--and it's based partly on my own workplace, so I could picture it pretty clearly. Stay tuned for chapter two!

Pomp And Circumstances Chapter 1 bmshirts June 26 2008, 12:17:08 UTC

Nice start. It's nice to see a story where Ennis is attracted to Jack from the start. I hope their time at the Cellar will start the ball rolling between them. I don't know if Anita is just being nosy or is interested in Ennis herself.
This looks like a fun story.
Thanks. Carole

Re: Pomp And Circumstances Chapter 1 shieldmaid1 June 29 2008, 02:26:00 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. Yes, I want it to be funny and fun with just enough angst to make it interesting. Stay tuned for chapter two . . .

bbmjack324 June 26 2008, 12:55:46 UTC

Be interested to see where this goes. Liked this description of today's youth: ..a group of baseball-cap-wearing, feet-shuffling, iPod-bound, sullen-mouthed freshmen.

shieldmaid1 June 29 2008, 02:26:40 UTC

Yes . . . not my *only* opinion of today's youth, but certainly a type often found hanging around in the hallway outside my office. :) Stay tuned for chapter two!