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SHINee Shorts 2013: ibreatheparadox

Sep 05, 2013 01:39

Title: Serendipity (Of us, and the years to come)
Author: ibreatheparadox
Pairing: Jonghyun/Key
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Word Count: 7,417

( And through the ups and downs of life, they make it work because a love like theirs comes once in a lifetime and knowing that is more than enough. )

pairing: jonghyun/key, *2013, rating: pg-13

Comments 1

bianse September 9 2013, 19:50:34 UTC

You write beautifully. Your story reads very naturally and the words flow effortlessly in a way that I can only really envy. (I have issues with sentences feeling really choppy so I love reading stories like yours where things just kind of swirl together like this.) This story is lovely, simply lovely. I really enjoyed how you wove the flashbacks with the present day and how their lives seems to converge at the event of taking a plane somewhere. I enjoyed this.