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lynlovesmin May 12 2010, 09:46:15 UTC
SPOT FOR MY COOKIE♥

ilysfm, babe!^^

marshmallow cookies forever!
maknae couple hwaiting!(:

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lynlovesmin May 12 2010, 09:47:45 UTC
damn, i forgot to say who my cookie♥ was.

it's 2pmconspiracy! ily babe(:

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2pmconspiracy May 12 2010, 13:03:42 UTC
yay! thank you, marshie :D i left you a spot on my fic too! and i realised you posted just before me, but i only saw it now. *dies*

anyways study hard babe! i'll be back to comment over the weekends~ rofl. im studying chem now ):

maknae couple ftw! ♥

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2pmconspiracy May 16 2010, 05:23:38 UTC
im back, marshieeeee! with a stupid headache i may add, cause of my stupid cough syrup -__- i'll tell you why online~

anyway, you really did it! hahahah i didnt know you were serious about writing incest! but anything that my yoobeul writes is amazing ^^ and this is, like usual :D and lol it's so short! oh well, you are queen of drabbles after all i guess ^^

hmm i must say i love it when you write from a particular person's POV! makes it more personal, like reaches out more to the readers so they can feel the feelings of the protagonist more specifically(: lol i sounded like a book and idek why. it's the headache im telling you, marshie ):

and i still owe you like a comment for your other fic that you posted yesterday ^^ dammit, we keep missing each other btw ): on msn that is. that makes me sad, marshie. i miss you ):

anyways, i love you very very much alright! ^^ come online soonnnn~ or i'll go stalk you, rofl. like i dont already do that xD

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joiceechan May 12 2010, 10:18:52 UTC
SPOT HERE! (:

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joiceechan May 12 2010, 11:08:07 UTC
"Because, falling in love with your brother isn’t a good thing… right?"

Onkey killed in an instant!

But dear, this is amazing! I haven't thought about writing an incest fic myself and you conveyed the emotions so well. I love how they stayed true to themselves in the end, though everything's just so wrong. The angsty yet lovey-dovey feel. Onkey love knows no boundaries, indeed.
Thanks for sharing! (:

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lynlovesmin May 12 2010, 14:17:43 UTC
rofl, instant death,
kind of what i had intended XD

really? *____*
idk, incest has been bugging me for quite a few days already. it's hard, yeah? to keep going, even when you know it's wrong, and if you slip it's all over. yay! you got my intentions. angst, yet fluff.

thank you sooo much for reading!
and understanding what i wrote XD 8D

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onkeyloves May 12 2010, 16:18:34 UTC
no spot for me ):
but oh well, whatever.
you know i'll still come here thick-skinnedly to comment, lol.

OH INCEST,
i like the topic.
i mean look,
if Jinki was my brother,
WHY ON EARTH WOULDN'T I FALL FOR HIM.
AND GWIBOON, if she was my sister,
i would too.
though that'll turn me gay plus having incest, oh too much for the world to handle. too bad, get over it. pfft. no, i am kidding, i am straight and i don't love my brother/sister that way ^^ (simply cos he's not Jinki/Kibum's material. pfft. thank goodness. my sis's pretty but too fierce for me to fall for her /:)

I LOVE MY WIFE/HUBBY THO'.
she's still the awesome-st ♥

Gwiboon traces his jaw line with her finger. Promise me, that you won’t regret what we had, she says, and then I’ll let you go.
oh crap, i love this. idek why.

then came this,
I’ll never regret it, Jinki whispers fiercely, before adding softly, I’m sorry I couldn’t take care of you.it's like a million of needles, slowly piercing through my heart ( ... )

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onkeyloves May 12 2010, 16:20:39 UTC
a million needles*

i honestly don;t know what's wrong with me.

~_______~ --> is called the 'lame shit face', according to your cookie, rofl.

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cindyxmc May 12 2010, 19:09:29 UTC
oh, oh my gosh.
i totally imagined how 10 years down the road,
they will reunite & gwiboon is married to jonghyun or something!
D: that's not good!

thank you for sharing bb,
i love you!<33

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dndr310 May 13 2010, 04:57:38 UTC
woot! incest! I've never even had that topic in mind 8D
anyways, you wrote the whole thing beautifully.
but i bet later on they'll marry somebody else D:
thanks for writing this! this is inspirational! 8)

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