Once Again
Title: Once Again [Short Story]
Pairing: Onew / Key
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Romance
Summary: Are you sure you made the right decision?
Disclaimer: This is the sequel to Forgive Me for Lying. I don’t own anything other than the ending - this one-shot - since the storyline is taken from the song itself. I wrote it just because I want to. Enjoy ( Read more... )
Pairing: Onew / Key
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst, Romance
Summary: Are you sure you made the right decision?
Disclaimer: This is the sequel to Forgive Me for Lying. I don’t own anything other than the ending - this one-shot - since the storyline is taken from the song itself. I wrote it just because I want to. Enjoy ( Read more... )
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Thanks for all your help, sweetie!
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CLAIM!!!
XD
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ROFL...XXDD...poor Jjong..XD
Jonghyun had a gut feeling that Key wouldn’t like what he might see but before he could manage to stop Key from reading it, he heard a gasp and the invitation fluttered to the floor. Sobbing, Key ran up the stairs into his room, slamming the door behind him. Picking up the card, Jonghyun was only slightly shocked to read that Onew was planning to get married in three weeks.
AARRGGHHHH!!! WWHHYYYYY??? >.<
He was pretty sure that there was another reason Onew was doing this. However, he now knew that he couldn’t continue to take his time looking for ( ... )
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But he does! If not Dream Team, then his electronic soccer games! XD So yes, poor Jjong.
Hahaha. Jinki lied about that actually. He simply printed one to send to the Kims cause he knew they would not come to the wedding and find out that there's no wedding in the first place. XD
Yes! Written that way for the benefit of both of us to fangirl on. XD
He called a private investigator actually. XD And yes, the Kims are very rich but Kibum is trying his best to spend every single cent with all his shopping! XD
As you have read, Jonghyun had gone through the same thing with Minho. So he understands the situation of Jinki and Kibum. XD
Hahaha. I know I asked you about it but what was it about? I kinda forgot a little. XD
Sneaky Jonghyun is love~
Sorry... But at least they got together! XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it cause it's kinda written for you, what with all the Jonghyun parts. XD
But yeah, you know me well... The ending feels too rushed?
And I know what you're waiting for!!! XD
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Thank you for the inspirations! :)
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but as long as everything turned out well ^^
i like this unnie :))
<33
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Thanks for liking it! XD *huggles*
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i'm sorry for taking soo long to readd and comment! :/ i owe so many comments i actually feel bad i don't remember to whom i owe them to -______-
anyways!!! when i read part one i thought the story wasn't gonna have a happy ending :l seriously!!
and i really REALLY wanted to kick Onew for giving up on his relationship so easily!! like "DON'T YOU LOVE HIM ENOUGH?" but sure i understand part of what he went through... with Key being insanely rich and stuff
Part two was a real breather though :)
i loved how Jonghyun was all over his lil brother's problems! bringing Jinki's ass back to Korea hehe xD
Even though i hate Kibum's dad, seriously that guy should drop dead -__-', it was pretty cool of him to accept his son's relationship like that!!
Key probably whined to him while sitting on his lap lol
thank you soo much for spotting meee!! :)
and i'm terribly sorry for commenting just now!! ugh... *sighs*
( ... )
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Thanks for being there for me!
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alright. but im pretty busy rushing out a market report. so I PROMISE i'll be back asap!
<3
& its thank YOU for being there for me! ^^
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Oh gosh, hate market reports. Good luck for it!
Hope to see you soon!
Hahaha. Let's just be each other's cheerleaders? :)
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dubujoo and boogie14
Thank you so much for your support, dearies!
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Plus I wasn't too sure if you wanted to read this cause you said you didn't wanna read angst. *pouts*
I promise to spot you on all OnKey fics if you promise to read and comment on all of them. XD
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Huuuu, so I mistaken Jinki for lying to Kibum~ Thank goodness he didn't lie, because that would really break my heart :|
“You’re such a bastard, why did you come back?! You always keep hurting me! I don’t even know why I love you anymore! All you ever do is constantly hurt me! I hate you, Lee Jinki!”
Hearing Key say this just made me sniffle!! I know that he is misunderstanding the whole thing but yelling all those things to Jinki... I can only imagine the hurt Jinki feels. He left Kibum for his own good but then ;__________;
I'm glad Kibummie's dad let Onkey be together~ because if not, I would have grabbed my pitchfork >:|
This whole Onkey situation is resolved all thanks to Jonghyun :D I'm so proud of him for being so smart, helping and loving in this fic! Despite his stupid less smart character in most fic, I like the way you depicted him.
“Don’t throw away something you love just because someone wants you to. Go and get him back. Hwaiting!” and pushed Onew ( ... )
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missed the first part
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Hope you enjoy it! :)
Crying Kibum XD
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Something wrong with my friends page DX
you make me cry a lot instead make kibum cry. TT____TT
hate you, no love you.
Gosh when kibum start to throwing things that's so DRAMATIC! Really hurt me! TT^TT
Hiks..
But but..
Yeay!! They're together now!
You know I've just realized it.
That, when you write that kibum cry, and start when jonghyun lock him..
I found it funny.
Lol, that's my favorite line.
Owh! And I like the brother interaction between kibum and jonghyun!! XD
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Kibum didn't know so he didn't understand.
Funny? XD Why? I don't get it. *pouts*
Hahaha. Jonghyun and Kibum are just weird together. XD
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