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shiny_taemin

Cruel Fairy Tale 1/1

Oct 27, 2011 21:06

title: Cruel Fairy Tale
part: 1/1
pairing: Changmin/Kyuhyun
rating: PG-13
genre: angst, drama
warnings: dark themes including: blood/violence, murder, mental disorders

summary: Kyuhyun was burned by flames when he was only a teenager; and now he has to bear the scars of his best friend's mistake forever.

( He shakes uncontrollably, silently begging for Changmin to get here faster, sooner; because now the man is tying him down and the handcuffs are getting tighter and tighter, so tight that there's more red appearing on Kyuhyun's clear skin - )

rating: pg-13, fandom: super junior, genre: angst, genre: drama, fandom: dong bang suju, fandom: dbsk, length: oneshot, pairing: caramel macchiato

Comments 10

nattieloveqyu October 28 2011, 01:31:51 UTC

I like it but i don't really understand the ending, how come Kyuhyun became a suspect in a murder?

shiny_taemin October 28 2011, 01:49:15 UTC

hm~ well. i'll try to say this with the least amount of back story possible: basically the changmin (in kyu's mind) insisted that the only person who wasn't thinking bad thoughts about kyuhyun's state of mind/health/etc was changmin himself - basically he planted the idea that kyuhyun's parents and his (psychiatric) doctor were trying to run him into the ground. kyuhyun wasn't actually on the bed with changmin over him, but that's when kyuhyun feels most comfortable, when changmin is protecting him with his body from outside forces. in reality, he was actually fighting back against his parents and his doctor, using the strength he didn't have before because he thought he was most powerful with changmin "around" him. kyuhyun kills his parents and his doctor and thus he's the only suspect.

hope that made sense! ;A; i had my friend beta this before i posted it. a--ah, she said it made sense, but . . if you need anything else explained, feel free to ask. c:

nattieloveqyu October 28 2011, 13:46:42 UTC

Okie ! Thanks alot , now that you explained it it makes alot more sense

shiny_taemin October 28 2011, 20:15:15 UTC

yeahhh ;___; the story itself is supposed to be confusing -- since kyuhyun isn't in the right state of mind, his thoughts wouldn't be either -- but perhaps i made it too much? thanks for reading though!

ext_844563 October 28 2011, 01:47:31 UTC

awesome.
haha when I read the title, I was immediately reminded of "cruel fairy tale" by IU. Great song btw, both of them.
Wow I actually didn't expect the whole Shim Changmin thing... this was cool~

shiny_taemin October 28 2011, 01:51:02 UTC

haha i was listening to that song & 'the story only i didn't know' on repeat for the entire writing process. >//////> i'll shamelessly say i absolutely adore iu!

thank you very much!

maru_chan2201 October 28 2011, 06:40:14 UTC

Wooowww... I really like it. I love everything about psychology and suju^^. Thank u for sharing.

shiny_taemin October 28 2011, 20:12:24 UTC

haha i love psychology . . . and of course i love super junior too! :3 no problem.

marsheumallow November 1 2011, 22:32:13 UTC

i absolutely love this. i love the way it's so abstract. /mems

Re: hatcherykipo July 21 2012, 22:56:14 UTC

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMzgVshG6CI