[FIC] And the melody rippled (like a hummingbird's wings)

Oct 31, 2009 02:24

Title: And the melody rippled (like a hummingbird’s wings)
Author: shipmateee
Pairing: Joe/Miley!friendship, Nick/Miley, slight Joe/Nick
Rating: G
Word Count: 2500
Warnings: angst
Summary: Joe can suddenly see why tweens the world over have fallen in love with this scrawny, southern fourteen-year-old girl.Disclaimer: Probably didn't happen, guys. Let's not ( Read more... )

[pairing] joe/miley, [music] miley cyrus, fic, [pairing] nick/miley, rpf, [pairing] joe/nick, [music] jonas brothers

Leave a comment

Comments 32

(The comment has been removed)

shipmateee November 1 2009, 02:24:11 UTC
Thank you so much for the wonderful comment.
The one thing I really worked hard on was making it natural and believable, and I'm so happy that came across. :)

Reply


5goodgears November 1 2009, 19:09:00 UTC
I love this. I love how bittersweet the whole situation is. Well done!

Reply

shipmateee November 1 2009, 20:22:59 UTC
Thank you very much :)
I really appreciate the comment ♥

Reply


miss_bennie November 1 2009, 23:37:08 UTC
Oh my God, I love this so, so much. Just, AUGH. There is really not enough fic out there that explores Joe's relationship with Miley (and Nick, by association), and how they have that different bond that really could be something but at the same time can't, for so many reasons (even if they both have an awareness of it). And you really captured that here, in the most heartbreakingly quiet way.

He still can’t help wondering if this was Miley’s first proper break up, too.

My heart is in PIECES. So excellent.

Reply

shipmateee November 2 2009, 00:44:52 UTC
You are one of my favourite writers in this fandom, and to hear a comment like that from you on my fic is incredible. Thank you so much, I really appreciate it.

I've always been really curious as to what kind of relationship Joe and Miley have, with or without Nick, and I'm just glad I've written it in what seems like a believable, if a little heartbreaking, way.

Thank you, again ♥

Reply


rrushingtriumph November 3 2009, 06:56:02 UTC
oh my god this was absolutely fantastic.
i love that you don't ignore the idea that Nick and Miley were really great together and you find this incredible way to make Joe a part of this picture.

this hurt my heart so much and a;ldkjf incredible.

Reply

shipmateee November 3 2009, 21:41:28 UTC
Thank you so much!
I'm flattered you think it was fantastic :)
(also, KEYBOARD SMASH, ty bb!)

Reply


cosmicvanilla March 24 2010, 05:23:24 UTC
asdhfjkahf! You write Disney rpf too!? I shall now worship you. *throws food into fire*

This was utterly perfect. I loved how you characterized everything. I think everyone Miley meets falls a little bit in love with her. :)

And Joick is <3

Reply

shipmateee March 24 2010, 17:41:08 UTC
asdfkajhgakjshg You are too sweet, like oh my gosh.
Thank you so much for the lovely comment, and wow I can't believe you like Disney rpf and Joick, too!

Hope you don't mind if I friend you :)

Reply

cosmicvanilla March 26 2010, 07:11:21 UTC
You deserve all of the praise, you write wonderfully. I wish I had your mad skillz.

Nope, but I warn you I never post because I live a boring life and therefore live vicariously through others. :)

(So, I shall also friend you. lol)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up