[FIC] Next Time and the Time After That (Damon/Elena) M

[shipperjunkie]

Title:  Next Time and the Time After That
Author:  shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing:  Damon/Elena
Word Count: 2,168
Spoilers:  Post 3x22
Summary:  Elena and Damon, biting, their first time
Author’s Notes:  So okay you guys, I haven't really written anything in forever.  Like, ten years?  I'm much more comfortable in my role as fanfic enthusiast.  Basically this was

Comments

[linsell_farm]

Apparently writing is like riding a bike in that it comes back to you quickly even if you haven't done it for awhile. Good for you for being inspired again after a long time off!!

I very much enjoyed reading this story, because it combined sexy times with good plot, and good characterization. I liked the way there wasn't much dialog between them but what was said sounded like them and their usual interaction.

The parts I like best are the way Damon drinks Elena in with his eyes, Elena being monosyllabic [This. You. Us], Damon only lasting 3 strokes, and his teasing her about not being her dinner.

Well done. I hope we see more where this came from. Also, what is it with muses doing a lot of their talking in the middle of the night? I've noticed that as a trend amongst the many talented writers on my f-list :)

[shipperjunkie]

Thank you so much, I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this!

I'm really glad you mentioned they they sound like themselves because I really worried about that, especially with the endearments.

My muse actually hit while at work, in the middle of a ten hour shift, so I downloaded a word app and wrote chunks of it on my phone!

Thank you again :)

[linsell_farm]

You're welcome ;)

Characterization is what I look for most in what I read (and stress about the most in the couple attempts at writing). The endearments fit just fine for me and didn't take me out of the story.

Ahh, clever thinking writing on your phone. Modern technology is a wonderful thing (when it works ;)

[fallinangelz21]

Over!Eager!Damon is Over!Eager! Heh

Descent job, my friend. ;p

I enjoyed this muchly. You shouldn't be afraid to write. You should do it more often. Your Damon and Elena are both in character and the fandom needs more writers who can manage that.

[shipperjunkie]

I WAS GOING FOR DESCENT SO GLAD YOU NOTICED THE DESCENT

I'm so tickled you liked it! And they're in character for you, YAY! I can't ever seem to string more than five words together without going hey, this is going to suck and hey, where was I going with this? and hey, hello there, tumblr, here, have the next few hours of my life, nbd.

Thank you, Mariah :)

[fallinangelz21]

It's hard to miss a good descent.

"I can't ever seem to string more than five words together without going hey, this is going to suck and hey, where was I going with this? and hey, hello there, tumblr, here, have the next few hours of my life, nbd."

I think that's how I've written the last three or four chapters of DaCP. It's so damn annoying. LOL

[shipperjunkie]

Plus the shiny, shiny Olympics :p

[badboy_fangirl]

I particularly loved the part where she laid herself open to him--oh, the trust and vulnerability of that moment. Gah, I just love them so much and want that for them, for them to get to that place together. *sigh*

“Elena,” was all he said but his voice told her everything she already knew - how much he wanted her, how much he loved her, how he would never leave her even if she never loved him back.
*weeps*

As a vampire, she had the strength to bear the weight of Damon for as long as she wanted.
This means SO MUCH MORE than what it means. Gah, just gorgeous. I really wish I had written that line.

ETA: THANK YOU, by the way. Duh, I feel like an ingrate. I appreciate the fic very, very much. Because nothing is worse than bad porn. :D

[shipperjunkie]

I'm so so so glad you liked it, as it was basically made for you!

I was hoping the laying herself open for him to look at part was going to come off more emotional than physical!

I just love his voice, gah!

And oh thank you for mentioning the line about bearing the weight of him, I thought people were going to think well duh he's a skinny dude. <3 you so much!

"I really wish I had written that line." What an awesome compliment coming from you. :)

They were both over eager lol, Elena just got derailed by vampire urges. Hope that satisfied the prompt ::

[bluejean452]

Loved it :)

[shipperjunkie]

Thanks! :)

[fluffyfrolicker]

Bless D/E porn. This is why we are friends. BLESS YOU.

[shipperjunkie]

LOL! Porn buddies FTW! Glad you liked it :)

[fluffyfrolicker]

Porn buddies are the best kind of buddies obviously :D

[shipperjunkie]

OBVIOUSLY.

Holy shit, look at him. Gah!