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[FIC] Delayed Reaction (Damon/Elena) M/NC-17

Oct 07, 2012 03:19

Title: Delayed Reaction
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 1200
Rating: M/NC-17
Summary: PWP. This is a prompt fill for badboy_fangirl's Damon Salvatore Comment Ficathon. (GO PROMPT/WRITE!) Candy’s prompt: Damon/Elena, they have a sexual relationship now (it's not the first time) but Damon's...er, having a hard time. Getting there. So Elena ( Read more... )

i hope heather-ann will squee aboot this, because of candy and/or marta, what even, vampire diaries, words r hard, damon/elena, fic

Comments 14

upupa_epops October 7 2012, 11:04:13 UTC

UNF. OF COURSE HE COMES ON COMMAND! I can't with this boy and his pathetic ways.

I love how frustrated and ashamed he is (really, Damon, you should know better, but of course you don't know better), and how vaguely amused she is. How she knows exactly when to give him a little push. How it's all just a bit uncomfortable. In short: you rock <333333333333.

Ugh, how am I going to write my own version now? I shouldn't have read this!

shipperjunkie October 7 2012, 21:20:07 UTC

UNF. OF COURSE HE COMES ON COMMAND! I can't with this boy and his pathetic ways. Damon! <333

In short: you rock <333333333333
Thank you so much!! :) I was so tickled when I woke up and saw your comment!

You can do it! :) The end results of a prompt we both like have to wind up vastly different, right? ;p

mridul777 October 7 2012, 13:07:48 UTC

what upupa_epops said. And can I tell you, I am falling in love with these "Damon/Elena NC-17" fics of yours, they are unlike anything I have EVER read. And trust me when I say that I have read so so many... that .. nevermind... :P :P

Anywho, you somehow end up making each of the situation in which they umm..... "become intimate" so real life, or maybe in TVD future liike, plus you somehow give a different essence to it, so it stays normal yet beautiful. It's not totally dreamy, its not totally larger than life or over-reaching or fantasy... it is something, that might happen to everyone who are with their right partners and are in love. And that is soo cool!

I loved it!!!

shipperjunkie October 7 2012, 21:24:27 UTC

Oh wow, thank you for such a lovely comment!! :)

plus you somehow give a different essence to it, so it stays normal yet beautiful. It's not totally dreamy, its not totally larger than life or over-reaching or fantasy... it is something, that might happen to everyone who are with their right partners and are in love. And that is soo cool!

WOW! Thank you! My thing seems to be fluffy emotional porn, I guess, so I'm glad you enjoy it so much! Your awesome review really tickled me. :)))

spuffy_noelle October 7 2012, 13:49:53 UTC

LOVE THIS!!!! Are we ever gonna see this (PG-13 rated version of this, anyway) in the show???!?!

shipperjunkie October 7 2012, 21:24:46 UTC

THANK YOU!! :)

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shipperjunkie October 7 2012, 21:25:00 UTC

Thank you!! :)

badboy_fangirl October 7 2012, 18:09:49 UTC

This is even better than I could have imagined....just guh. Pretty darn sexy, even though, it's, um, er, awkward.

Poor Damon. I like the part too, where he doesn't even know what his problem is...he's not having angst right now, other than he can't get off, but it's just so...real. Like sometimes there doesn't seem to be a reason, even though with these two, I'm sure we could always find a reason. But psychologically speaking it's great that he doesn't know and she's not all 'let's talk about it,' it's just, let's try something else, and get you there.

Also, next to the let's fuck, y/y? note from the previous fic, this is probably my favorite Damon inner monologue bit ever: As far as he’s concerned, Damon and Elena’s Clit are the best of friends by now (DS+EG’s C 4Eva) and he doesn’t like to be away from his new buddy for that long.

I wonder if he's carving that into park benches around town. And I love that he calls it his 'new buddy' like, is that who replaced Alaric??? LOLOL.

shipperjunkie October 7 2012, 21:38:37 UTC

This is even better than I could have imagined....just guh. Pretty darn sexy, even though, it's, um, er, awkward.
YAY! I'm so glad you liked it, I wasn't quite sure what you were looking for specifically but this prompt wormed itself into my brain. Thank you for the excellent prompt!

Like sometimes there doesn't seem to be a reason, even though with these two, I'm sure we could always find a reason. But psychologically speaking it's great that he doesn't know and she's not all 'let's talk about it,' it's just, let's try something else, and get you there.
I didn't go into a big reason for it because sometimes it does just happen, but I can see now that that's what you probably were aiming for with the prompt? I was more concerned with the hmm awkward physicality of the moment and how she could help him. They can talk later. ;p

Also, next to the let's fuck, y/y? note from the previous fic, this is probably my favorite Damon inner monologue bit ever:HEE! I'm tickled you liked it, I nearly pulled it out right before posting, ( ... )