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[FIC] Delayed Reaction (Damon/Elena) M/NC-17

Oct 07, 2012 03:19

Title: Delayed Reaction
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairing: Damon/Elena
Word Count: 1200
Rating: M/NC-17
Summary: PWP. This is a prompt fill for badboy_fangirl's Damon Salvatore Comment Ficathon. (GO PROMPT/WRITE!) Candy’s prompt: Damon/Elena, they have a sexual relationship now (it's not the first time) but Damon's...er, having a hard time. Getting there. So Elena ( Read more... )

i hope heather-ann will squee aboot this, because of candy and/or marta, what even, vampire diaries, words r hard, damon/elena, fic

Comments 14

worldwasasong October 10 2012, 20:15:58 UTC

There are few writers in any fandom who write realistic, not-always-pretty sex. So when I find it, I really appreciate it. Your fic is always well-written, in-character, and hot without being unreal fantasy. Kudos - to both your skill and your consistency. I've begun to look forward to these one-shots of yours.

...Yes, I am a terrible reviewer. I have to actually have something to say before I say anything. But know that I'm always reading.

shipperjunkie October 10 2012, 20:21:43 UTC

What a sweet compliment, thank you so much! :))) I really appreciate you taking the time to comment, but even if you don't, I'm glad you're reading. :)

bitcheesquared October 12 2012, 20:11:51 UTC

Very hot, and yet sweet as well. Loved this.

shipperjunkie October 12 2012, 20:44:08 UTC

Thank you! This was my little oddball fic, I'm tickled you thought it was hot and sweet. :)

My second favorite... fallinangelz21 October 16 2012, 14:14:19 UTC

Yup. I've decided that this is my second favorite thing you've written after Hot Mess. It's just delightfully fun to read. Fluffy, yes, but with an awesome smutty edge.

So, I was reading this and thinking…how does one review porn? I mean, like really… “Nice work, Katie. Great description of Damon riding her and I can really picture the way he’s got her legs over his forearms and is practically bending her in half…”

Yeah, no. That’s weird.

All that said, I actually DO have to comment on the fact that you write smut really well. You address the not-so-glamorous aspects of sex - the sweat, hair sticking to bodies, toes cramping, knees hurting, etc - in a way that somehow makes it that much more intimate and completely sexy. So, kudos. Skill is skill and while I know that you want to branch out and develop your writing in other ways, you shouldn’t diminish how naturally skilled you are in this aspect.

Elena never really has multiple orgasms, not unless he goes after it with a single-minded determination like it’s his goal in life ( ... )