[FIC] Landslide (Damon/Elena) R

Nov 08, 2012 02:30

Title: Landslide
Recipient: upupa_epops
Prompt: Damon and Elena - I don't love you, but I always will. A future!fic in which they are on-and-off for decades. They have an understanding.
Author: shipperjunkie
Characters/Pairings: Elena POV, Damon/Elena
Word Count: 10,200
Rating/Warnings: R
Spoilers: AU after early Season Four
Summary: Elena chooses herself. Clean breaks are a myth ( Read more... )

i hope heather-ann will squee aboot this, because of candy and/or marta, vampire diaries, words r hard, fic

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lady_slayer November 8 2012, 22:04:00 UTC
This was so lovely!
... and I really like the fact that you never wrote anything about how Bonnie or Jeremy died. In most stories that stretch over so long a timeframe, the deaths of the humans pop up some time or another (even in one of my own stories).
So I think that you left that out was a nice touch.
Everything else was quite perfect too - the way Elena got to live her life and still Damon always came back; how in the end she decided she had been single-Elena long enough and went and searched for him. How she didn't seem to doubt for a minute that he would welcome her... *sigh*.
veeeeery nice^^.

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shipperjunkie November 9 2012, 00:38:20 UTC
Thank you so much! I was tempted to write about Jeremy's death but backed off.

**tickled** :)

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Tempted, huh? fallinangelz21 November 9 2012, 20:44:57 UTC
Uh huh...*snicker*

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Re: Tempted, huh? shipperjunkie November 9 2012, 21:30:37 UTC
For a hot minute. >.< someone planted the idea and let it fester. ;p

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bogwitch November 9 2012, 00:03:09 UTC
Ooh lovely!

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shipperjunkie November 9 2012, 00:38:34 UTC
Thank you! <3

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traciaknows November 9 2012, 04:50:34 UTC
I honestly think that this is one of the best D/E fics I've ever read. It was just wonderful. My favorite part was:

"So what? Fuck it," he’d said. "Whatever this is already looks like more fun than hanging out with any of those people. What are we doing, crying in an empty bathtub about how we're old and life's unfair? I'm in."

It was so remarkably Damon. All of it was. He really would wait for her for forever wouldn't he?

Thank you so much for sharing this. It was perfect.

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shipperjunkie November 9 2012, 07:50:42 UTC
Oh wow, thank you so much! :) What an amazing thing to say. <3

That line is my favorite in the entire story! I'm so tickled you picked that particular line out! <33

I think Damon would wait and give her time. I don't think he'd wait alone but I think he'd give her space. ;p

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bitcheesquared November 9 2012, 10:11:26 UTC
I guess she needs to be selfish because she knows when it's time it will be forever. Loved the way you wrote Damon, his patience and his humor and even his despair.
Beautiful story... though I hope the writers don't keep us waiting as long. LOL

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shipperjunkie November 10 2012, 00:22:04 UTC
Thank you for such a lovely comment! Yeah I think fifty odd years is a long time! Lol

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badboy_fangirl November 9 2012, 23:33:59 UTC
So there is just this feeling here, and when I read it before, that I believe Marta would call "mood" and as I'm not really a mood girl/writer, I think it's important to really note it when I pick up on it. The complete comfortableness between them, and how it only increases over time is just...there is no way to teach someone how to do that sort of thing with their writing. You just do it so naturally, and it makes the whole story feel so real. It's like, of course this is what happened, what else could have possibly? There is just nothing, this is the only possible outcome ( ... )

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shipperjunkie November 10 2012, 00:20:11 UTC
Wow! WOW! Thank you SO MUCH for that amazing comment! I'm at work or I'd babble on and on. I love everything you said more than I can say. I think a together-forever outcome is the only way for them in the long run, too, so this was such a challenge to figure out how to accomplish the on-and-off aspect.

" So good. And if people don't like it, they are fools."

<3

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