"Summer Assessment"

Dec 24, 2009 22:10

Title: Summer Assessment
Fandom: KHR
Characters: Colonello, Reborn, hints of Colonello/Lal Mirch and Reborn/Luce
Written for naniaru for the khr_exchange09

Summer Assessment )

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pollinia December 24 2009, 15:04:28 UTC
This is perfect. I've never really had a desire to read fanfic for these characters, but you made everything feel so natural and well characterized. Amazing fic you have here! ♥

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shizuke December 24 2009, 15:18:37 UTC
thanks for reading even though this isn't your usual fare =).
and double thanks for the positive feedback!

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ekmisao December 24 2009, 15:11:28 UTC
Spot-on, man. Good job. Great work for your giftee. ^^v

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shizuke December 24 2009, 15:20:40 UTC
Thanks very much!

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aradiantsun December 24 2009, 16:10:10 UTC
This was really enjoyable! I like the set-up of the mission being a trial of sorts to something bigger that Colonello isn't aware of. And the last line's a killer.

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shizuke December 25 2009, 15:41:11 UTC
Thanks, lol. I liked that final line too. Sounded like the kind of jackass stunt Reborn would try to pull.

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dame_batsie December 24 2009, 21:28:26 UTC
I adore this! Not many fics are Arcobaleno-centric, and this was great. <3

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shizuke December 25 2009, 15:49:18 UTC
This was my first attempt at an Arconbaleno-centric story, so thank you!

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naniaru December 25 2009, 09:51:38 UTC
Ooooh~ I LOVE it! This is exactly the kind of fic I've been wanting to read~ Action-packed plot, superb characterization, those witty dialogues (and omg, Falco~ ♥)... This fic is pure gem. ♥

Thank you so much for this!

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shizuke December 25 2009, 15:34:44 UTC
I'm really glad you like it. This fic is meant for you in the first place ^^
Happy Christmas!

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