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shopteacher_guy

Chapter 5

Jul 17, 2006 10:20

“…..room?” Harry jumped as he realized that Anita had just asked him something.

“Excuse me?” Harry said, cursing himself and realized had been woolgathering.

“This IS the right room?” Anita asked him again. She seemed to be looking at him as if she didn’t believe him.

Harry tried to shrug his shoulders and instantly regretted it, both the pain of ( Read more... )

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needlessnoodles July 17 2006, 15:13:57 UTC

I like the ending. That was funny, and Anita-ish.

shopteacher_guy July 17 2006, 15:27:30 UTC

Wow, that is about the biggest compliment you could give me.. I am humbled and happy... I go through a love/hate thing with my writing.. I guess I am not the most self-assured writer

needlessnoodles July 17 2006, 15:33:07 UTC

I'm the same way when it comes to my writing. And right now, it's been 4 months since I updated my main story on ff.net. It's sad really, because I'm almost always thinking about it.

shopteacher_guy August 22 2006, 16:17:43 UTC

Yeah, me too.. I have been stuck on this all summer, but now chapter 6 is going up, a very very tough chapter to write and 7 is well on it's way..

Don't care anonymous July 25 2006, 03:51:30 UTC

I don't care what you call me as long as it's not too late for diner... sorry i've been talking to friends about some of the corniest pick-up's we've ever had used on us. One of Mine was "YOu look dirty, wanna take a shower..." Sorry I supose I'm off topic.
I don't care how you announce me, watersprite or LDBriah. though I should probably start going with LDBriah considering I just opened an account under that name so I could try posting some of my 1,000 word drabbles... 1,000 words isn't really a drabble, but ooh well. If you want to get techinical I should probably call them drammas with out plot. Strange how i have so much to say about nothing, it's amazing what staying up for 28 hrs strait can do to you--I can only immagine how soldiers or doctors/nurses do it for double that... come to think about it some new mothers too...

Re: Don't care shopteacher_guy July 25 2006, 03:55:30 UTC

cool
LDBriah it is!!!

I am re-working chapter 6 and hope to have it to you soon...
How is the new site coming along?
and how about a link to said site??

AJ