Hey, this isn't so bad...
I like freaked out and overtired Harry. His little brain is running in circles chasing it's tail.

Chapter 8 needs one bit of conversation between Richard and Anita and then... off to beta it goes!

Finally with out further ado the beta’d version of *drum roll* LdBriah is the best beta every, her suggestions make the story better! (my beta can beat up your beta!)

Inescapable Chapter 7.1

The standard disclaimer apply, thanks to all 3 authors who let me play with their works. JKR, LKH and Mhalachia

Harry stood there for a while, trying to get ( Read more... )

Hey, school is back and I am tuckered out!
I think my super-beta is also snowed under so that is why Chap 7 isn't up..
or is that chapter 8? god I am tired
I may post the next chapter pre-Beta...
If you read this, drop me a word or three

Chapter 6:

WARNING!, this chapter contains graphic violence and some people may be find it very disturbing! You can skip this chapter and get enough info from the next to follow the story!!! (honest)

Richard slammed the passenger door so hard I had to hold on to the steering wheel while the Jeep rocked back and forth.

What the fuck was that all ( Read more... )

“…..room?” Harry jumped as he realized that Anita had just asked him something.

“Excuse me?”  Harry said, cursing himself and realized had been woolgathering.

“This IS the right room?” Anita asked him again. She seemed to be looking at him as if she didn’t believe him.

Harry tried to shrug his shoulders and instantly regretted it, both the pain of ( Read more... )

Hi all..
My muse must have decided to stay in Utah for an extra week. I tried and I tried to get through chapter 5, then yesterday.. wham! it hit me.
I sent a version of chapter 5 off and I hope my super beta is still on the case.. if she is on vacation, expect to see a buggie version of the chapter in a few day.. Chapter 6 is about 75% so if all ( Read more... )

AARRGG I hate school!
Well anyway chapter 5 is almost almost done, I am having a hard time with one part and I am so whipped from work that I can't get through it. chapter 6, the problem one, is at my super-fantastic beta reader so with all hope it will follow closely
NO PROMISES
but
Once school is out I will be devoting at least one day a week to ( Read more... )

Here it is Chapter 4 version 2
Thanks to Watersprite99 for her super beta skills

JKR and LKH got the ball rolling and own it all
Changing the plot,
From now on;
My words are in Black
Mhalachia’s works are in Blue!.. easier on me that way.. we will be seeing less blue words from now on.

Chapter 4: Be careful what you wish for.

The ride home had been ( Read more... )

Chapter 4 is done, YEAH,
the bad news is, the e-mail server is down at work, where I finished the chapter
So I will get it to my new and hopefully trusty beta readers tomorrow...
Now I will start on Chapter 5

Ok.. so it was a bit longer than I thougth but chapter 4 (version 2) should be done tomorrow... really..
I am almost there..
I NEED A BETA READER...
any takers?