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shopteacher_guy

chapter 6

Aug 22, 2006 12:18

Chapter 6:

WARNING!, this chapter contains graphic violence and some people may be find it very disturbing! You can skip this chapter and get enough info from the next to follow the story!!! (honest)

Richard slammed the passenger door so hard I had to hold on to the steering wheel while the Jeep rocked back and forth.

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Comments 8

WOW! anonymous August 23 2006, 15:16:32 UTC

WOW! i love this chapter! it was great! i eagerly await the next chapter!

Re: WOW! shopteacher_guy August 23 2006, 17:17:19 UTC

Hey, thanks for the read!
It wasn't easy to write, but I am satisfied with it.

I LOVE IT darkfuture_seer August 24 2006, 18:32:23 UTC

It's very very good. ^_^ I LOVE IT! The whole thing, not just the chapter. Have you posted it anywhere else? If you haven't, you should. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Re: I LOVE IT shopteacher_guy August 24 2006, 18:35:42 UTC

I'm not sure where else I could post it and let people know what parts I wrote, it is after all based on someone elses writing

Thanks for the kind words.. that means a lot. I realized that what I have been writing is really chapter 8, not chapter 7, so I am going to work on chapter 7 today

needlessnoodles August 28 2006, 05:57:56 UTC

didn't think it would go like that...at least I don't think I did. Perhaps I should go back and reread the other chapter.

sniffs hushaby September 2 2006, 16:49:09 UTC

i was getting really worried, it's been what a month almost two.
but by the heavens you did it delibratly didn't you just to give me a hart attack.

fantastic chapter i could almost hear him cry.
don't leave it to long to update again pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease

kirallie September 7 2006, 04:18:51 UTC

Great work!!! Poor Harry! At least his magic kicked in to save his life. Will the bites leave any lasting affects like the werewolf attack did in Inevitable? Keep up the great work!!