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Chapter7

Oct 01, 2006 23:00

Finally with out further ado the beta’d version of *drum roll* LdBriah is the best beta every, her suggestions make the story better! (my beta can beat up your beta!)

Inescapable Chapter 7.1

The standard disclaimer apply, thanks to all 3 authors who let me play with their works. JKR, LKH and Mhalachia

Harry stood there for a while, trying to get ( Read more... )

Comments 8

witchdollpar October 3 2006, 06:25:41 UTC

I'm glad you were able to work with your beta to update to soon. I like where you are going with the story, and making it unique from Mhalachia's when both were started at the same point. Quite the creativity.

shopteacher_guy October 4 2006, 00:46:08 UTC

Thanks, it is nice to actually get the results you are looking for. Let me know if I lose the mark, so to speak.
also Thanks for the review

It's Great! darkfuture_seer October 9 2006, 18:50:43 UTC

It's great! It's becoming really different from Mhalachia's story. Hopefully, this story will become just as long as that one. I'm guessing slash will be too much to hope for, huh? But, that doesn't really matter in the long run. Anyway, Keep writing! ^_^

Re: It's Great! shopteacher_guy October 10 2006, 02:45:07 UTC

I am not in the same class as Mhalachia, I can't update like she does or flow like she does. I have to read and re-write, then think about it for a few days and then read and re-write again.

Chapter 8 is actually almost done. I have one scene with Richard and Anita that isn't right yet.

Thanks for the kind words.

inthefire2002 November 29 2006, 04:20:42 UTC

I came across a link to your story on Mhalachai's AB/HP list. I really like the direction you have taken this story in. I hope that Harry becomes good friends with Nathaniel. He may need to talk to someone later about what happened to him in the barn, and since Nathaniel has also been sexually abused, he could help Harry to deal with his emotions.

I look forward to the next chapter. Do you mind if I friend you, so that I will know when you post your next update?

shopteacher_guy November 30 2006, 02:40:16 UTC

Yeah, I got stuck on chapter 8, then went through a "I'm not a good enough writer" thing and now I am ready to start working on the story again..
Thanks for the kind words and Yes Nathanail has already picked up on what happened.

anonymous February 14 2010, 08:27:27 UTC

I love this story. There aren't enough HP/ATVH crossover and this one could become one of the great ones. Keep up the good work, you have a lot of loyal fans in your corner cheering you on.

Writing shopteacher_guy July 19 2011, 00:46:08 UTC

Well, the story kinda sot a got dark... Really dark. I hadn't planned on it going that way and that kind of scared me. Truth be told all ATVH stories do that, but Mhalachia was (I think a bit squinked by the developments).
I have outline for a bunch of chapters and an general arc. I read the last chapter and thought "who wrote that?"

Tanks for the kind words about the story, I haven't really been back since I put it down, may haps I'll pick it back up