A Splitting Of The Mind - Chapter 15

Feb 04, 2010 21:31

Title: A Splitting Of The Mind [Chapter 15]
Author: shoved2agree
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: Gerard Way sees the world differently. Alone and institutionalised, Gerard claims that he is being hunted, and that his mind holds the key to existence. Does Gerard really hold such a powerful secret? Or is he just insane like everyone else in the ( Read more... )

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Yeay! "A Splitting of the Mind" is BACK! equinescientist February 5 2010, 14:02:57 UTC
Sorry, Ninja-girl. I wanted to comment last night, but I lost the battle against sleep.

I am soooo (with o to the 1,000 power!) excited that you have finally written a new chapter! This is my most beloved of ALL fanfics, past and present. Considering it was also my first fanfic in a decade, it will always be the most special.

Loved how Markman (who I always, for some reason, envision as Robin Weigert, not necessarily from her role in the TV show Life, but instead from the episode "Committed" from CSI:, which was set in a residential treatment facility) tells him "Don't be such a drama queen." It is proof of what a comfortable relationship she and Gerard have cultivated over his time at Bluestone.

I was also amused by his decision to have tile floors, instead of the ugly carpet in Markman's office. (Hardwood floors, Gerard...). He thinks about the most abstract and awesome things.

The nod to Calvin and Hobbes made me squeal with delight. (I haven't completely lost my mind, right? I did speak of Calvin and Hobbes with you, ( ... )

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Re: Yeay! "A Splitting of the Mind" is BACK! shoved2agree February 8 2010, 11:15:06 UTC
It's alright, you're forgiven. Sleep trumps commenting in all cases i'm afriad.

Yay for most special fic :D :D

I've never heard of that woman before but just secretly, Markman is [very] loosely modelled on Cuddy for House =]

Yes! Calvin and Hobbes was a nod to you, haha. I remembered all those comics you sent me about snow and it reminded me and I knew I had to include it.

Thanks for commenting ♥ I do appreciate all your input and your listening to all my theories and such.

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Yeah! kardo1 February 5 2010, 21:17:17 UTC
Still loving this. Thanks for updating - I know how "real" life can get in the way.

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Re: Yeah! shoved2agree February 8 2010, 11:16:24 UTC
Thanks for understanding sweetie ♥ Yes, real life can really suck sometimes.

Thanks for still sticking with me and commenting =]

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sakurashakedown February 6 2010, 03:01:33 UTC
omg, brillant as usual XD
i hope they escape, poor frank

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shoved2agree February 8 2010, 11:17:10 UTC
:D! Thanks!

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mili_revenge February 6 2010, 06:48:46 UTC
Oh my God, I squealed the moment I read the email about you updating the story!!!!! It's been so long!!!! *freaks out* lol
The last part was amazing. It's making me a bit anxious to know how this story is going to end (not that I want it to end!!!). The part when Gerard tells Ray about the comic and asks himself 'why the fuck did I know that?' impressed me a lot. I guess it is because you make him look so real. I love Ray and Bob in this chapter. And when Frank bites his sandwich? Win!!!! You have no idea how happy your updates make me :) Great job as always!!!! *hugs*

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shoved2agree February 8 2010, 11:19:16 UTC
OMG, yes, i'm so sorry it took so long. I try really hard to get it done sooner but life gets in the way - damn life.

Your comments make me pretty darn happy so thank you sweetie for taking the time ♥

*hugs back*

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mili_revenge February 11 2010, 05:49:10 UTC
Oh, I definitely know what you mean by life getting in the way. I'm glad you are still updating and that you haven't forgotten about this.
Your updates make my day/night! *hugs*

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alana2x1 February 7 2010, 02:05:10 UTC
Aw man, I saw this yesterday and was all like 'yes! I am so gonna read this tonight, cannot wait, etc etc.' but then I got violently sick last night and that killed off any and all plans I had, bah ( ... )

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shoved2agree February 8 2010, 11:22:27 UTC
Oh gosh, I hope you are feeling better? D: That's terrible.

Thanks so much for sticking with me. Yes, no death in the near future, i hope!

Thanks for your comment, as always! ♥

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