A Splitting Of The Mind - Chapter 15

[shoved2agree]

Title: A Splitting Of The Mind [Chapter 15]
Author: shoved2agree
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: R/NC-17
Summary: Gerard Way sees the world differently. Alone and institutionalised, Gerard claims that he is being hunted, and that his mind holds the key to existence. Does Gerard really hold such a powerful secret? Or is he just insane like everyone else in the

Comments

[2wagethiswar]

ugh why am I always so late?? I truly suck.
but this was amazing as usual.
and oh. Bob. ;_;

[shoved2agree]

Ugh, I know this is a super late reply and I'm sorry :(
But thanks for reading and commenting
<3

[roxy_palace]

Oh how wonderful! I didn't know this was up. Yay! *\0/*

[shoved2agree]

I hope it was to your expectations :)
Thanks sweetie <3

[jesseward]

Why didnt I see this update earlier? Stupid LJ.

*gleeface*
Lovely. Simply lovely.
Ray and Bob were brilliant this time around, and Frank's breakdown was beautifully written.

[shoved2agree]

Thank you, sweetie :)
Better late than never! So very pleased that you liked it and for taking the time to comment.

[roxy_palace]

Oh, my...I do so love this story. I love how your unreliable narrator gives so much away that he himself can't see. It's so deftly handled. Incredibly mature, talented writing.

I was just wondering if you have the whole story plotted out already and have an end in mind, because the line the story has taken is starting to make me anxious. And I'm now so irrevokably in love with the characters I'm not sure I could handle a 'One Flew Over The Cuckoos Nest' type ending!

I can't wait to see what you do, though. Wonderful stuff.

[shoved2agree]

Thanks sweetie <3
Yeah, I did have an ending planned out already, but I'm not sure if it's anything like OFOTCN because I haven't read that novel or have any idea how it ends. What type of ending does it have? Not a good one, i'm assuming?

Sorry this was a super quick reply. I do have a life, I really do haha :D

[roxy_palace]

OFOTCN ends with...well...the hero ends up labotomised...but it spurs one of the other characters to break out.

So yeah, a mixed bag as endings go. I don't want anything horrible to happen to any of the chars in your fic. Really, I get quite anxious about it.

I know it's a bit gushy and everything, but...that final scene, it was incredible. I'm totally blown away by this fic. No offense to fandom, but you're kind of too good to be writing like this and just posting here. I'm glad you are though!

I have a real life too, but it's not as exciting as the imaginary one here!

[shoved2agree]

Whoa, I would never have thought of a labotomy o.o Rest assured, there will be no labotomys ha.

I don't want it to be a horrible ending, but I just feel like it's inevitable, you know? I feel like I've kinda unconsciously set Gerard up for demise and it would ruin the progression of the story to change it. Ugh, sorry if you have no idea what i'm talking about. I'm also sorry you are getting anxious about it.

If it does end up being a terrible ending I might write an alternate ending that's happy, or something.

And whoa, thank you so much! I like gushy! :D Maybe one day i'll get out of fandom writing and make lots of money XD

Real life will never be as magical or exciting as fandom!

[clandestine_fey]

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!

I need this story! I love it and it's adorable and angsty at the same time.

I printed this story in 5pt font on notepad and it as like 54 pages and I stayed up from 11-6 am reading it in the same position from the light of my tv.

I need this story. I'm kinda obbsessed with this universe!

UPDATE!!
(btw I loled at the chapter title)

[shoved2agree]

I will.

Soon.

Very, very, very, excruciatingly soon.

Love <3

[clandestine_fey]

Oh thank god!

Seriously it got to the point where I looked at your update pattern to see how you wrote and updated stories.

You missed April so I got worried.

BUT YAY!!