Chapter XXVII Piece

[shri_tal]

This bit is troubling me. It took a while to write it. But I could be over-analyzing it.

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Comments

[gul_obsidian]

Very unexpected and interesting. I like it, but I'm not sure if Garak would react so calmly to Julian denying him since they are in the privacy of the house. Also, I'm not sure that Garak would agree that trust is needed. And, he would tell Julian as much, I think.

[shri_tal]

This is only part of Chapter 27. No worries. It has gotten longer.

That was just a part that was troubling me. It has changed a lot since what it was there. I may try to post that chapter soon. I do not know though.