Fic: Bedtime Story, Chapter 5

[shy_dragon]

Title: Bedtime Story
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Steve/Danny, pre-slash
Warnings, spoilers, etc.: This fic is finale-free and does not have spoilers for any specific episodes. Some chapters have references to flashbacks and nightmares, as well as moderate Steve!whumping and angst.
Disclaimer: Hawaii 5-0 does not belong to me, and no infringement is

Comments

[megaranight]

This one is so sweet! I liked how Steve, whom I see as a solitary man, is finally getting used to have friends around him and how he misses Danny.

You captured his little obsession for order really well. I don't know if you noticed in an episode (can't remember which one) when Danny's coming at Steve's and Steve is cleaning the sink. This little scene told me a lof of things about Steve and his military obsession for a neat and tidy place. I'm a bit like this myself :-)

Please make Danny hesitate then drop at Steve's just to see he's okay... *puppy eyes*

I liked fightgirl!Kono, too :-)

[shy_dragon]

Thank you!! I don't remember that scene specifically (I need to watch the episodes again, now that we're in reruns!), but a lot of little details like that make me suspect that Steve needs to have everything just so. Plus, not being able to do everything himself would probably drive him nuts after a while.

Don't worry, Danny won't leave Steve alone too long. ;>

[kitmerlot1213]

I like that Steve's getting used to his team invading every section of his life and that he misses them--misses Danny-when they're not there.

Keep up the great work on this fic :)

[shy_dragon]

Thank you!!

[bfive0]

Great work <3

[shy_dragon]

Thanks!

[starbuckssue]

I love this. I think Steve has been a very solitary person since his mother died and his father sent him away, he's finally started to trust his team and let them into his life and realise how much they are willing to support him, especially Danny. He doesn't want to appear too needy but at the same time, after having them around for so long it is just making him realise how lonely and full of ghosts the house is and he needs his Danno!

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! That was exactly what I was thinking. I'm glad it came through so well.

[annabel1984]

it took me all day to finally read this but I love it! I love how Steve doesn't want to seem too needy but he misses his Danno.

Can't wait for more xx

[shy_dragon]

Thank you!