Fic: Bedtime Story, Chapter 9

[shy_dragon]

Title: Bedtime Story
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Steve/Danny, pre-slash
Warnings, spoilers, etc.: This fic is finale-free and does not have spoilers for any specific episodes. Some chapters have references to flashbacks and nightmares, as well as moderate Steve!whumping and angst.
Disclaimer: Hawaii 5-0 does not belong to me, and no infringement is

Comments

[jazzybabe56]

LOLing @ the pointy stick reference....these two had quite a journey to get to the proper end - but I wonder if Danny learned anything from the Guns and Ammo mags he was reading....

LOL cute fic! I enjoyed it :)

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! I think Danny learned more from Steve being willing to ask for what he wanted. Kono read more of "Guns & Ammo" than he did. ;>

[abbeyrd62561]

I enjoyed that and am so glad Steve said what he did allowing Danny to explain things to Steve. This isn't the end is it? This was just so sweet.

[shy_dragon]

Unfortunately, I'm not good at writing porn (which would almost certainly be the next scene), so this is the end. I'm very glad you liked it!

[rileybear67]

Not porn... erotica! *humph* Have I taught you nothing?!
*hugs*
Love the story!

[shy_dragon]

I'm not sure you and I make the same distinctions between porn and erotica. If I could manage the next scene, I think it would be pretty much pwp! (Of course, I thought this was going to be light fluff at the beginning, so what do I know?) ;>

I'm glad you liked it!!

[kitmerlot1213]

This was a beautiful ending!

Good for Steve for asking Danny about the goodnight kisses and good for Danny for telling Steve how he feels about him--this was a very sweet story :)

[shy_dragon]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

[bfive0]

OK first things first, I had to stop reading for a good 2 minutes because I couldn't stop giggling like a school girl when Steve asked for the forehead kiss xD I'm like "damn being a brat works sometimes" XD But overall that was beautiful :D Thanks for the lovely story *hugs*

[shy_dragon]

[grin] I'm glad it made you giggle! Asking for what you want isn't necessarily bratty though. ;>

Thanks for all your great comments!

[megaranight]

The last chapters of your story are my own bedtime story tonight :-) I really enjoyed reading it and the last chapter is exactly how I wanted it to end. The line where Steve asks for his "kiss good night" is a keeper!

Thanks for writing this story. It was very sweet and very pleasant to read.

[shy_dragon]

Thank you so much!! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.