Its a nicely written piece =) and all the parallels to things that happen in your life are kinda scary. I like it, and thats saying something since i generally can't stand writing that deals with the everyday and the mundane. good ending, but i would beg to differ; dreams can die. but all in all it is very life-like, colorful, interesting, and all sorts of other descriptive words i can't think of at the moment. -max
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