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[siameseamazon]

A HUGE CONGRATULATIONS TO DEANNA!!!
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this is what's been absorbing me today:

"She-Shaken"
Shining hypno-crazy cold,
Swirled tempting, questioned: bold?
She sips mint chocolate, coated cold,
Dressed in brights and nibbled bold.

Painted Snowcap,
'Venturine dream,
A quietly Kosher
Amazonscream.

Lopped in half
And grated gold.
A

Comments

[blueeyedchica]

Nice Stazh. u r a really talented writer.

[_deciduous]

I love love love love LOVE it! It almost borders on being a form poem... a villanelle, perhaps? Girly, you need to post your writings more often... I love reading them

And thank you for the congrats. I'm so. effing. EXCITED. Feeling rather... relaxed, as well. It was the luck in that flower, I think. =)

Love you, darling.

[siameseamazon]

well, i'm glad you liked the poem-- you were its inspiration!
i didn't have a form in mind, but maybe i can make it fit one ;)

i want to take you out on a congratulatory trip to bentley's! it's just so incredible...

love, stazh

[_deciduous]

ps - we should SO go out to bentley's. i've never been there before, but i love eating out ANYWHERE. lol

[666_cracked_666]

snap snap snap snap snap snap
tre' coolieo girl

Nice

[gluteousmaximus]

I like it much more now that i actually read it myself, rather than having it read to me. It's almost Manson-esque, if only it had dark connotations and such...oh well, change is refreshing and I'm sure i could do without any depressants at the moment.