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[sic_re_vera]

Title: Look, Don't Touch [part 1]
Author: Myself, Kendra, sic_re_vera
Rating: PG (for mild violence)
Notes: I took liberties with Doumeki and Watanuki’s pasts. I took liberties with the magical laws that rule xxxholic-verse. I took liberties with the perspective I was writing for. I took a lot of liberties in general, but against all odds the finished

Comments

[karma826645]

Wow.

Your detail with this is really amazing and the entire story flows really, really well..

This is great, continue! =D

[sic_re_vera]

Thank you, and I shall.

[_ame_no_chikara]

Wah... Poor Watanuki T_T This is very well written and I'm interested to know the woman's drive to do that ^^;

[sic_re_vera]

I kind of have it planned out, what drove the random spirit to do that sort of thing, actually, though I'm not quite sure how well it will go over.

[akayalovesyaoi]

Hmm, hmm, and hmm, that was interesting but very chaotic, can't wait for next part^^

[sic_re_vera]

=) thanks.

Chaotic in the sense of the flow? Or in the actions? I thought the flow was a bit jumbled, but I couldn't think of a better way to do it.

[sarisia]

Oh that's awesome. Liberties or not, I'm intrigued and fascinated. Tell me more! I want to know what Doumeki's price is.

[sic_re_vera]

Thank you! Doumeki's price isn't anything life-shattering, really. I can't wait to write the next part of this.

[sic_re_vera]

Ah! Thank you! Coming from such a wonderful author like yourself that really means a lot to me!