Undertow - Secret Santa gift for Chamilet

[sid401k]

Title: Undertow
Genre: AU
Rating: NC17
Warnings: None, except for the M/M sex.
Word Count: 1,500

Comments

[gwylliondream]

Wow.... that was spectacular. You did a great job of setting up Ennis's perspective.

[sid401k]

Thank you! That's always such an interesting challenge--figuring out what the character is feeling and trying to communicate it. So glad you think I succeeded.

[grlewis]

hmmmmm. this was a new angle on things, it was a good way to get the boys together.

[sid401k]

Well, they've GOT to get together! We all agree on that. Thanks for reading!

[sienata]

i loved this!! awesome new twist on our story!! thank you. :)

[sid401k]

Thank you! So glad you enjoyed. I'm just following in the footsteps of marakeshsparrow's Lead Me to Your Door -- what if Jack and Ennis didn't meet on Brokeback Mountain? How would they get together?

riding bulls

[joetheone]

It is always fun to ride a bull. Hmm I liked how this kiss got them all worked up. Joe

Re: riding bulls

[sid401k]

...easily as the right key turns the lock tumblers...

I think that, given Ennis' initial hesitation, that Jack was pretty surprised at getting kissed. I was trying for a little echo of the reunion kiss here. Except it's not a reunion, but a first meeting.

So glad you enjoyed.

[morrobay1990]

It's them but different...loved it!

[sid401k]

Thank you! That's pretty much what I was aiming for: them but meeting in a somewhat different way. So glad you enjoyed.