Comments | sid_sree: nice and simple...

sid_sree

nice and simple...

Feb 26, 2007 20:15

Mohsin Naqvi Sahab ( Read more... )

Comments 6

deponti February 26 2007, 15:13:19 UTC

So beautiful...do you mind if I post this on my LJ? Just love it...especially the elegant simplicity of that last line...

sorry for the delayed reply... sid_sree March 3 2007, 07:01:12 UTC

sure ma'am...a mention of the original poet would be good...

deponti February 26 2007, 15:27:52 UTC

Could I have *your* line by line translation too? I want to be accurate in my translation...

sid_sree March 3 2007, 07:15:07 UTC

If you don't mind my audacity...I'd want to read your version first...that way it is unaffected by anybody's pt. of view...and I too can get a fresh view...

thanks
sid

smriti February 26 2007, 16:05:23 UTC

Hey, good to see you back here with more sher-o-shaayari !

sid_sree March 3 2007, 07:16:01 UTC

y, thank you ma'am...