Feels Like Forever, Part Two

[sienata]

FEELS LIKE FOREVER, PART TWO

Ennis led the way out of the garage, not saying anything to his friends who were mostly shit-faced and would never know or care that he was gone unless he brought it to their attention. Something about the way Jack had looked at him had sent an odd quiver of hopeful lust shimmering through him, and so he wanted to get

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[sienata]

thanks! :)

[tizi17]

yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[sienata]

thanks! :)

[eandj]

this made my day
thank you for this sweet story- you're on a roll, that's great
Paula

[sienata]

thanks so much. glad you enjoyed it. :)

[ramona4jake]

now this is what I call a weekend delight - such a wonderful surprise !! "… maybe it even felt like forever." - this has so much hope, it's beautiful ! thank you so much, Jane !!

[sienata]

thanks for reading. i'm glad you liked it. :)

[turtle_2806]

Thank your for this longer version. I liked the "original" version, but this is even better.
Wonderful !
Christina

[sienata]

when i reread the original version, i liked it too, but when i started tinkering with it, i just kept opening doors to find out more little things. nothing really changed, we just got a much closer view. i'm sure i could go back and double it again, and not add much more to the story than what's already there. but i'm not gonna!!! lol

thanks for reading. :)