giving up

Oct 04, 2009 21:23

memories for sale. three for a dollar. All the remnants and residues, treasured artifacts of a love slipping away, yet breathing, standing before me with her hair parted softly. A mere few feet are uncrossable galaxies. With every breath i expect you to exhale syllables of repentance, of teary eyed union. But you have become a soldier marching to a ( Read more... )

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teh_mad_bomber October 5 2009, 04:41:46 UTC
This is going to make me sound like a complete stalker, but I was browsing through the random recent entries and just happened to see this.

It appears that you have known agony, but you need to overcome it. Things can only get better ((I know I'm of no help in terms of talking to people on an emotional level))

Your writing is simply amazing, and I admire it. I like your vocabulary, emotion and thought behind your words; pretty much everything.

Sorry for the random comment lol

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silentsoliloquy October 5 2009, 17:37:10 UTC
No need to apologize. If i didn't want people reading random things it'd be silly to put them on the internet. Thanks for the kind words.

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