Deafening Silence - Chapter 1 of 5

[silmanumenel]

Title: Deafening Silence - Chapter 1 of 5
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[kitmerlot1213]

I am so glad that you didn't just end it with Danny walking out on Steve and Five-0 forever. I can understand Danny's anger but he'll be more effective as a police officer with the taskforce then at HPD and I'm sure he'll realize that once he calms down.

Of course, I can't wait to see what Steve does to get him back. Please continue this story as soon as you can :)

[silmanumenel]

Like I said, I love happy endings too much to have left it like that. :) The taskforce is of course Danny's home, but he's got to calm down - and some stuff to work through - before he can think straight again.

I'm happy you like it, I'll post the next chapter as soon as possible, maybe tomorrow.

[huntress69]

I could have sworn I commented on the original post, but apparently I didn't, and I would have asked for more. (Bad me - please send Steve to spank me - I won't enjoy it at all). I am hurting inside for both of them, not sure which one more, and thank you for deciding to continue it.

[silmanumenel]

No, I'm sure you wouldn't enjoy it at all. :) I'll be sure to send Steve if I see him, though I'm not sure I'd want to let him go if I had him here... But sharing is caring, so yeah. ;)
I'm happy you liked it, even if you are hurting inside. They're definitely both in a lot of pain at the moment. But thank you for commenting, I'll post the second chapter soon.

[finduilas_clln]

I can't wait to read more of this! It's really brilliant.

[silmanumenel]

Thanks so much! Next chapter following soon!

[finduilas_clln]

Yay! \o/

[jiang1646]

i luv it a lot. more plz

[silmanumenel]

Thanks, more to come soon. :D

[ellie_pierson]

Ouch!! Steve(and the area of Oahu) cannot survive without Danny. Steve is going to have to do some fast talking to fix this.

[silmanumenel]

Fast talking's a good idea, question is if Danny's going to listen. Oh, and btw, I totally approve of your icon! :)